Topic: Writing Feedback

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Re: Writing Feedback

To those of you who've finished Sister Margaret's One Big Lie, would you mind leaving word here, or dropping me a note with overall observations or anything you think I should consider tweaking in the rewrite? I'm just beginning the first big pass on it and would love the feedback. Thanks!
PS Also wanting critical eyes on first three chapters for SS contest.

Re: Writing Feedback

Overall the story is solid. The biggest problem I have is how much Lisa pushes everyone away. But in the end, it worked out. I guess it sort of made her unlikable in the beginning, but she grew on me.

Re: Writing Feedback

P.S.

Will hit the first three chapters this weekend.

Re: Writing Feedback

Wait a few more days Janet. I've rewritten one, but have only just begun on 2 & 3. I'll shout when the newer versions of those are up.