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Kdot wrote:

More moving parts might not be a good thing

Yeah, I'm coming around to that conclusion too. I already have a hard enough time finding stuff for Antonio to do. Add a dog, and the chapters will either grow longer or everyone else gets less screen time. As is, I already have to add a few paragraphs in later Holy Land chapters to incorporate Connor's groupies, who chase after him from place to place to see him perform miracles and post the videos/pics online.

The battle between good and evil animals will definitely be included, though. I'm almost certainly going to add an extra murder in Rome, which allows for a few extra chapters in the Holy Land to visit areas where Jesus went but Connor didn't. The all out Watership Down-like battle will go into one of the new chapters near the end of the trip.

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Riddle me this: Since I use an alternate timeline in Rise of Connor, that is essentially an alternate universe. Now, it's easy to imagine God being beyond (outside of) all universes, but what about us? If there were other versions of us, then what soul do they have (not mine obviously)? It suggests that alternate universes aren't compatible with Christianity. The reason I realized this is that I'm considering rephrasing my story's "new path through time" to a "timeline in an alternate universe". Although the word timeline didn't exist back then, it could simply be a term first used and defined by the Holy Spirit in the information documented by my 4th-century hermit prophesying Christ returning as a child (a document written by Satan).

Currently, my writeup refers to the "original path through time" and the "new path through time", the latter having branched off the original the moment God accepted Satan's Last Challenge. I did this because I didn't want my characters to speculate about why events in their version of reality don't match the Bible in our real world, without having an explanation for it.

Although Satan wrote the answer to that question, he actually told some truth with regard to the challenge. They really are on an alternate timeline, there really is a challenge, but he lied when he "prophesied" that Christ will return as a child. The real challenge is about Connor (the Antichrist) choosing whom to "destroy" when the real Christ returns (Connor will throw the dagger at either Christ or Satan at that point).

So, my explanation of why the Bible is inerrant is because it was written for our real timeline, not the new/alternate timeline. However, both timelines originated from the same single timeline (ours, the only one that existed initially), and the new timeline didn't exist until the challenge became a reality. As a result, the story world has the same Bible as us, which only prophesies about our real future, not the story world's future. Once the characters realize they're no longer on the original timeline, the question of the Bible's inerrancy goes away.

It's interesting, though, that multiple universes with multiple copies of us appears impossible for Christianity. Either we have one soul per universe, or one soul across all universes. Both of them break Christianity.

Re: Satan's Last Stand (the Connor series) - Dirk B.

>>It's interesting, though, that multiple universes with multiple copies of us appears impossible for Christianity. Either we have one soul per universe, or one soul across all universes. Both of them break Christianity.

One soul per universe doesn't work since when all universes wrap up and end then can some end up in heaven and some in hell?

The one soul across all universes is intriguing. I can almost envision it as that soul deciding which universe to end up in without knowing what the outcome is. That is tricky. But every time we make a decision, we do that. I if decide to cheat on my taxes then I choose a timeline compared to if I don't cheat. Each choice has its own outcome. If you look at each binary decision point/branch of my life's tree, then there is a huge number of possible outcomes. Each has its own universe, or each can impact its universe. So, is it that there are a large number of universes or a universe with millions of dimensions?

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I have to admit, I'm a bit fuzzy about personal timelines vs. collective timelines. The Kelvin Timeline that JJ Abrams created for the Star Trek franchise, so he could change anything he wanted, is what I consider a collective timeline. I haven't watched anything new from Star Trek in many years, but I don't recall them ever discussing that there are infinite universes, and each decision by each person leads to another universe, which is what I call a personal timeline.

Tentatively, in my story, only God creates an alternate timeline and "moves" us there. Although I don't go into details in my 4th century document (already posted, by the way), it implies the original timeline has been abandoned. I couldn't do the challenge and also leave the characters, which technically includes us, on our original timeline since that breaks biblical inerrancy.

So, rather than God creating duplicate copies of us for the new timeline (which includes the challenge) while also leaving the original version of us in our real world timeline (where there is no challenge), I chose that he moved us there and abandoned the original timeline. That creates its own set of issues, though. While there may be only one of each of us in the multiverse that way (each with their own soul), somehow God recreated the whole universe (from the galaxies down to every non-human life form in existence) and put us there. What about all the microbes in and on our bodies, many of which we need to live? Did those move to? And the pet cat I was holding when God moved us? And every ape, even though some have almost the identical DNA as us? Etc.

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I've been mulling ways to eliminate dual timelines. It's a fairly complex issue, with plenty of plot holes no matter which way I slice it.

Rather than another timeline, which requires readers to wrap their minds around my 4th century explanation and ignore the plot holes, what if God gave the Bible prophets a vision of the future that is identical to what they eventually wrote down, yet that version would only come to pass if Satan did not issue the challenge?

In this way, the vision is true/correct, although the prophets, including John, and Satan will all misinterpret it as prophesying what will happen, rather than what could happen. This means the Bible remains inerrant. It is and remains the faithful word of God; it just has to be interpreted correctly.

While it could be argued that this is close to God lying, he gave all those prophets and Satan sufficient intelligence to question the prophecies, yet none of the prophets thought to consider what will happen when Satan reads Revelation. Even Satan should have questioned God's motives. As a result, Satan issued the challenge rather than suffer an eternity in the lake of fire.

That's exactly what God wants (and being omniscient he knows it will happen), but in addition to intelligence, God also gave those men (and Satan) free will, so the decisions (and the misinterpretations) were theirs to make. Just as God knows when someone will sin, it's still up to that person to make the decision that takes them down the dark path.

Had Satan seen how he was being manipulated and chosen not to issue a challenge, then the future prophesied in the Bible would actually come to pass, which leaves Satan back in the lake of fire. So, you see, technically, the "false" vision could have come true based solely on Satan's free will.

In this way, the Bible remains inerrant and I have no need to introduce an alternate timeline and everything that goes with it.

I wonder how long until this solution falls apart. smile

Re: Satan's Last Stand (the Connor series) - Dirk B.

Dirk B wrote:

While it could be argued that this is close to God lying, he gave all those prophets and Satan sufficient intelligence to question the prophecies, yet none of the prophets thought to consider what will happen when Satan reads Revelation. Even Satan should have questioned God's motives. As a result, Satan issued the challenge rather than suffer an eternity in the lake of fire.

Let me comment on at least a part that I can wrap my brain around his late in the afternoon.

I assume that Satan reads the Bible. However, there might be parts that God fogs Satan's mind so that he doesn't really understand it.

I think that Satan would be desperate enough to try anything to avoid the lake of fire. It doesn't matter if he stands a chance. Let's see, I have a choice of being in the lake of fire forever or trying something that has very little or no chance of working.

I'll keep on working on it.

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Re: Satan's Last Stand (the Connor series) - Dirk B.

there might be parts that God fogs Satan's mind...

Except if God fogs someone's mind such that they end up in the lake of fire, is the punishment still fair?

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Hey Dirk,
This is very complicated, but I see it like this.
Fate is a highway destined to connect with other segments of destiny, meaning there could be fluctuations in the timeline at specific points of time. But, regardless if the timeline shifts, fate will coil back into its predestine timeline and bring events to a point of previous prediction.
And if that doesn't make sense, know that I don't drink, so I'm not drunk. I'm dumb. :}
T

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I tell my doctor his pills make me stupid. tongue

I understand what you're saying, Terry, but the whole premise of the challenge is that things will not end the same way as originally prophesied by John and others. Since I insist that the Bible in my story remain inerrant, the question becomes, what's the best way to explain how that is possible? The alternate timeline is okay, but there is a lot of complexity to the concept if you think about it. The write-up for it is fairly straightforward for those who want to read at most a few paragraphs about how it works and move on.

But many readers these days are very savvy, and I don't want to publish something that is fatally flawed the moment you peek under the hood. If you do focus on it, then you have to think about things like: How many instances of me are there in the multiverse? Are we each distinct individuals, no more alike than twins, or are we connected on a deeper level? If the latter, how many souls are there for me? Is it just one that is somehow shared by all of us? I'd be okay with raising all those issues if that was the focus of the novels, but it's not. And there are many more issues beyond those above.

The other alternative I also considered right from the beginning was to sidestep multiple timelines (2 in this case) and have God give the prophets a vision of the future that is identical to our future. The latter would come true only if there was no challenge, which is the real world we live in. So, the Bible prophesies tell our future.

But the challenge changed that, which is a future God chose not to reveal in full. In part, it's to keep Satan from knowing his future. But mostly it's to prevent a crazy time loop. I'll skip the details for now.

As noted in my earlier posts, God wants Satan to issue the challenge, which is exactly what he eventually does. God's role in steering Satan to that chosen path amounted to having the prophets write the prophesies we see in the Bible, knowing that Satan would read and act on them in an attempt to prevent them from coming to pass. But the prophets and Satan are intelligent and have free will. They should have at least considered what will happen when Satan reads Revelation. The fact that they didn't doesn't change the fact that the outcome still required conscious decisions on their part. God knew what their decisions would be, but they made the choices.

While it's true that Satan really had no choice (lake of fire or mystery prize behind door #2), he made it far worse for himself. As mentioned in the ancient letter (written by Satan), demons and glorified humans have the ability to tolerate the Lake of Fire, although it still involves great suffering, but not so much that the punished beings can no longer contemplate their eternal punishment. After all, what's the point of a punishment if the condemned are in such searing agony that they are nothing more than tortured animals without even the ability to think anymore. Their whole existence would be reduced to one endless thought: agony!

Instead, Satan foolishly upped the ante by suggesting that if Satan won the challenge, God and the angels should return to the spirit realm and abandon Earth forever, leaving it to Satan to rule. God said okay, but if Satan loses, the temperature in the lake of fire will rise a thousandfold (oops). Since the challenge remained Satan's only escape from the lake, he had to accept.

And God has no need to fog Satan's mind.

I could ramble on, but I'm tired.

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The other alternative I also considered right from the beginning was to sidestep multiple timelines (2 in this case) and have God give the prophets a vision of the future that is identical to our future.

A third alternative is that the end-times we have in our prophecies already occurred and Satan has been freed from his confinement, (and that our "universe" was reset to see if he could lead mankind back down the rabbit hole a second time.

Revelation 20 wrote:

And cast him into the bottomless pit, and shut him up, and set a seal upon him, that he should deceive the nations no more, till the thousand years should be fulfilled: and after that he must be loosed a little season.

Upon being released, desperate to not go back into purgatory, Satan could make the wager. Since all the prophecies already came to pass, they could happen slightly differently on this iteration

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I'm doing this from memory, which is never a good thing, but for Catholics, the 1000 year period has been underway since shortly after Christ's death, when they developed the concept of the Eucharist. That is, to Catholics, the real presence of Christ on Earth.

It therefore follows that Satan is already in the bottomless pit, locked away. Naturally, that's not a physical pit, nor is there a physical chain around him. Since, figuratively speaking, his power is diminished in this period, what we see in the real world is his remaining influence.

I included the aforementioned chain in the first draft: the Christian cross around De Rosa's neck. It was secured around his neck by St. Michael at a moment when Satan was distracted. It's what causes his painful stigmata every time he kills a clergyman. That's what keeps him from killing more of them. The chain also prevents him from leaving his current (De Rosa) body.

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The loop concept would seem to be compatible with the Eucharist and an inerrant bible, unless I misread

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Are you referring to the loop I mentioned earlier but didn't explain? If so, it goes like this:

Assume John always knows and writes about what really will happen in the future. Since the challenge doesn't appear in Revelation, Satan will issue one. But, John should have foreseen that and mentioned it in Revelation, including the fact that Satan loses. Of course, as soon as Satan reads that, he knows not to issue the challenge, at least not that one. But if he doesn't issue it, then John would have written Revelation as we know it. And again, Satan would issue the challenge.

To prevent this loop, God prevents Satan from knowing his final fate. So, Satan would have issued the challenge and spent 2000 years preparing for it (breeding humans to produce superhuman Connor). Even though Satan no longer knows his fate, he has no choice but to proceed since winning is the only way he can escape the lake of fire.

He also no longer knows the fate of the Antichrist, the False Prophet, any of the demons, and all mortal sinners. If he did, that would give him too much information, from which he could probably guess his fate, and the loop would exist yet again.

So, God has to prevent Satan and us from knowing our fates. God is also more than willing to let Satan sweat over his ultimate fate.

Naturally, the fact that there are two possible futures, both equally valid, though only God knows which will come to pass, is really two timelines but without me having to even mention the word or describe the concept.

The only issue is whether Christians/Catholics will view God's actions as "lying" to the prophets. I say no because both timelines are equally valid, and either could come to pass based solely on Satan's decision about the challenge (naturally God knows in advance what Satan will decide, but that doesn't remove Satan's free will).

And God chooses to show the prophets the future that does not result in a causality loop, which also serves God's purpose with regard to the future rescue mission undertaken by Connor/Adam.

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No, the other loop. The one where the end times already occurred. Satan's back at it again because he's been released.
+Add the Eucharist as "in progress"

You can still adjust the 2nd round of end-times to suit your story's needs with a new challenge, the original inerrant bible has been preserved since those events played out as prophesized.

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I think loops in stories are great, especially unintended ones. But I'm not sure how this story would benefit from placing everything in a loop, other than an opening for sequels. smile The planned plot is already very complex (Connor carrying Adam's soul, Connor learning that he was bred to follow Satan, Dr. Lombardi is actually Eve in her glorified body, etc.). Also why would God allow that loop when he just took actions, per my previous post, to prevent a different one?

Current plan for book two:
- Apocalyptic events have begun (i.e., natural disasters, etc.)
- Connor is a badass; has twin Goth girlfriends with whom he regularly has sex; has concluded he's on the wrong side of history, but feels compelled to serve his father, even though he's still pissed off that he was conceived through rape
- Connor continues working to convert ever more Protestant churches to follow him; pushes Muslim leaders to convert as well; destroys several of their holy places, including the mosque on the Temple Mount, to force them to accept him; returns control of the Temple Mount to the Jews as a sign that he really is their Messiah
- Connor has begun experiencing symptoms of Adam awakening within him, which he doesn't understand and keeps hidden from Satan; those will get worse and worse
- Satan sends Connor's girlfriends away, so Connor ups the ante and takes a Protestant minister's 16-year-old son as a gay lover
- Bishop Romano is given the journal of a deceased geneticist, who in modern times, was responsible for Satan's ongoing breeding program
- Campagna invites Connor to a meal at her parents' home, where he meets a number of his relatives; he gets upset because everyone is being so nice to the "Antichrist"; he and his grandfather have a heart to heart on the balcony
- Romano arrives and shows Connor the journal, including entries about the gene in Connor that was bred specifically to compel him to do Satan's bidding
- Connor decides he wants out; their first stop is Campagna's regular church, where Romano hears his first real confession; he is baptized; they celebrate Mass; he receives instructions from the Holy Spirit to return to his father in preparation for what's to come
- He does so; finds his lover strangled in St. Peter's Square; confronts Satan; they have a huge supernatural fight in St. Peter's Basilica
- Connor collapses during the fight due to Adam's continued awakening; he's hospitalized; Satan summons Campagna because Connor seems near death and he's hoping she can save him; Connor recovers and returns to Satan
- Cardinal Nnamani continues to implement his holy vision to retake the Vatican "without violence" on the part of his followers; leads them to St. Peter's Square to confront the Unholy Trinity on the steps leading into St. Peter's Basilica
- all hell breaks loose; God uses Campagna to cleanse the Vatican of demons; Satan is severely burned/disfigured during the cleansing and disappears from the Vatican
- Adam awakens fully; the Holy Spirit arrives (same Black man as in book one) and uses his powers so Connor and Adam can meet face-to-face, even though they exist within the same body and share one soul
- More details TBD

- book three is equally busy, including Connor discovering and meeting his supernatural "cousins" from the breeding program, who still live deep in the jungle where they were bred; Apocalyptic disasters continue; the final confrontation between Satan's demons and Connor and his cousins at Megiddo; big-ass fight between Connor and Satan's lieutenant, who is actually many demons (10?) in one powerful genetically enhanced body; Christ returns
- lots more to the story, including the rescue mission, Connor's desire to free everyone from Hell, condemned sinners begin getting sucked into the Lake of Fire in vast numbers, where they "burn" for a time before transporting to other worlds to live/try again to make it to Heaven (this is akin to a loop, by the way)
- Connor/Adam given the chance to jump into the lake of fire and accept God's punishment on behalf of all mortal sinners, something Adam is too terrified to do, but Connor throws himself/Adam in; they burn until all that remains of them is the thought of "pain!"; finally, Connor/Adam are transported back to Megiddo, where Campagna, Romano, and others are waiting; Connor has a glorified body, making him immortal
- Connor and several of the main characters are taken to the top of a mountain by St. Michael, where they meet the Father; not sure if the mountain will be the same as the one where Moses went to receive the ten commandments; Connor and the others are told about the portal, the other worlds for sinners who didn't make it to Heaven this time around; Connor is told his punishment for trying to free all souls from Hell is to rule all of those worlds; Campagna and Romano decide to join him
- Satan eventually gets sucked into the lake of fire; he burns like Connor/Adam did; is transported to a small moon or large asteroid that is falling into the supermassive black hole at the center of the Milky Way
- Although I'm unlikely to live long enough to write any more books in the series (I still want to finish Archangel as a series of novellas), the ending to book three of Connor pretty much sets up an infinite number of potential sequels in which he rules the galaxy

Other than that, not much going on. smile  Now you probably see why I'd rather not add a loop to this story as well. smile

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Now you probably see why I'd rather not add a loop to this story as well.

> Removes the alternate timeline headache

Re: Satan's Last Stand (the Connor series) - Dirk B.

Kdot wrote:

there might be parts that God fogs Satan's mind...

Except if God fogs someone's mind such that they end up in the lake of fire, is the punishment still fair?

Satan rebelled and started the whole conflict. He is already condemned to hell (Matthew 25:41). Fogging his mind doesn't seem like a big deal to me.

I don't know if it's needed but I've also read that Satan cannot read our minds.

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Satan (De Rosa) can't, but Connor can. He's descended from both De Rosa (a recently killed member of the breeding program) and Campagna (unknowingly descended from an escaped member of the breeding program from centuries past), so he's actually more powerful than Satan, although I haven't figured out when the best time is to use that. His brawl with De Rosa inside St. Peter's Basilica in the middle of book two is interrupted when Connor collapses (Adam is trying to break through). Connor doesn't like reading the minds of people he cares about because he gets flooded with a lot of their private thoughts.

EDIT: I just figured out when to use it. smile During the aforementioned brawl, Connor allows his father to belt him in the face a few times before grabbing De Rosa's thrown fist midair with one hand and beginning to crush it. Surprises the hell out of Satan, after which Connor really lets him have it, right before Connor collapses.

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Re: Satan's Last Stand (the Connor series) - Dirk B.

>>The other alternative I also considered right from the beginning was to sidestep multiple timelines (2 in this case) and have God give the prophets a vision of the future that is identical to our future. The latter would come true only if there was no challenge, which is the real world we live in. So, the Bible prophesies tell our future.

But the challenge changed that, which is a future God chose not to reveal in full. In part, it's to keep Satan from knowing his future. But mostly it's to prevent a crazy time loop. I'll skip the details for now.
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I don't know if you have any other choice. God anticipated the bet and gave the prophecies, but it did not include everything that would happen. I have a hunch that we will not fully understand some parts in Revelations until after something happens. For example, what are those creatures mentioned in Revelations 9? We'll know after they show up.

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>> I don't know if you have any other choice. God anticipated the bet and gave the prophecies
George, I'm not sure from your sentence which future you think God has to give the prophets. In order to avoid the causality loop, I believe God has to give the prophets the version of Revelation that we ourselves have in the real world, which, as I noted way above, is a valid version of the future, just not the one Satan chose. Of course, God knows when he gives the prophets the version of Revelation without a challenge, that it is not the version that will ultimately come to pass. Do you consider that lying?

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Not lying, but an omission of fact

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"Don't eat this fruit because it contains bad-ju-ju knowledge" becomes an omission if God also plans ahead of time to kick them out of the Garden of Eden for eating it.

Here, I sense God doesn't know at the time of statement that he plans to give them the boot... but for arguments sake, lets assume his omniscience has told him they will eat it. Leaving out the "...also kicked out" part may unfairly pressure them to not make a fair choice. And omission is not technically a deception.

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Good comments K. But surely omission CAN be a deception.

Dirk:
If God is omniscient then He should know the outcome. So, He won't bet against Himself. Satan is desperate and will try anything.

If there are gaps in Revelations, then can your story fit into those gaps? The Chosen does stuff like that. Ultimately, Revelations states that God wins. We'll see the details as they unfold.

I'm trying to be somewhat theological... I hope this helps.

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I forget, when was the bet made between God and Satan?

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The bet was made shortly after Satan read Revelation, so early in the second century.

With respect to your previous comments, God knows everything, God will win.

Here's the logic I've tentatively settled on (unless someone blows this up on me):

Like everything in the Bible, the version of Revelation we have has to be interpreted correctly. So, when God shows it to us, common sense says that the correct interpretation of the future currently in the Bible is: Satan and sinning humans, change your ways or Revelation is what will happen to you. It's God's final warning.

As a result, Satan knows he must do something else, otherwise his butt will burn. Rather than stop sinning and return to worshipping and serving God, Satan cooks up the challenge, which, if he succeeds, offers him a different way to escape the fire while simultaneously forcing God and the angels to leave Earth, so Satan can rule it. Since God has a greater purpose for the challenge, he accepts.

The prophets, too, realize that Revelation is a warning (as are many Bible stories), not to be read literally (e.g., prove your obedience to God by killing your son, unless an angel stays your hand), so they have no problem writing it the way they did, which was done under the guidance of the Holy Spirit.

Humans, being smart too, have enough intelligence that they can figure this out as well (hell, I did, and my brain's not exactly firing on all thrusters, lol). It's just that most humans suck at interpreting the Bible correctly (45,000 denominations and counting), so most Christians think Revelation is literally what will happen.

Many Catholics have begun to realize what God intended, and have changed their interpretation, including the fact that much of the wording in Revelation is figurative, not literal. They too realize God is saying: Satan and sinning humans, change your ways, or Revelation is what will happen to you.

One might ask why God didn't simply come right out and say the above words. Sometimes he does, sometimes he doesn't. He didn't, for example, include an explicit statement prior to the story of the Flood (sinning humans, changes your ways, or I'll drown you all). Similarly, in Genesis, in the story of Adam & Eve, he didn't say, sinning humans, don't disobey me (i.e., don't eat the fruit), or I'll punish you severely, although he does say that elsewhere. Tons of examples where God has decided to show, not tell. smile

Here, too, dual timelines are no longer needed.