Topic: When do I Interest the Villain

Hi folks I am new to writing I have put up the first chapter of my book and would love some input from experienced writers.  I have a plot in my head for the rest of the story, that will unfold as we go along.  but I have one question.  at what stage do I need to introduce to the reader the villain?  I was originally going to be two thirds of the way through the book before the hero discovers him, but I think the readers will put the book down before then if I don't.

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Re: When do I Interest the Villain

Just my humble opinion, but I think the antagonist should be introduced as soon as possible to reinforce the role of the protagonist. What would the protagonist be doing all the time the reader is waiting for his antagonist to appear and create conflict which he must resolve. But there is more than one way to skin a cat if you can hold it still long enough without getting scratched. Take care. Vern

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Re: When do I Interest the Villain

Indeed. You should have an antagonist early even if the villain doesn't show up yet.

Note that the Wizard of Oz doesn't introduce its central villain until like book 4, but it has plenty of antagonists along the way.

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Re: When do I Interest the Villain

Hi all i have been away for a while but im back i have a short storey i will put up in a minute

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