<![CDATA[The Next Big Writer — Starting over with "Wanderlust"]]> https://www.thenextbigwriter.com/forums/topic2675-starting-over-with-wanderlust.html Fri, 21 Dec 2018 23:25:19 +0000 PunBB <![CDATA[Re: Starting over with "Wanderlust"]]> https://www.thenextbigwriter.com/forums/post37075.html#p37075 Thanks, Clarke. I've responded to your review.

Bill

]]> Fri, 21 Dec 2018 23:25:19 +0000 https://www.thenextbigwriter.com/forums/post37075.html#p37075 <![CDATA[Starting over with "Wanderlust"]]> https://www.thenextbigwriter.com/forums/post37072.html#p37072 Somehow, I thought I was updating my chapters and re-publishing them. It turns out, the new stuff didn't show. For this I apologize. I've now gone back and ensured the first three chapters are now what I meant them to be. More chapters will follow soon.

I've redesigned the beginning be separating the individual POVs into chapter one and two. The old reviews are safe and sound as I printed them all off and used them as a guide while editing. I agree, the first attempt was pretty lame. i hope the second start is better.

Bill

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