WATER

This is my first stab at the "modern" poetry that doesn't rhyme. I am contemplating entering it in an arts festival competition here in our town later this year. It has to be a poem up to 100 lines and must address the festivals theme of water, in an imaginative way. The festival theme is on water in dancing, fashion, plays and art. If anyone could please suggest a title I would be grateful and PLEASE be ruthless in your criticism. I have to get this RIGHT ! Thanks, all.

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