THE CITY OF MY DREAMS

Seattle Stories Anthology is looking for submissions of short stories and personal essays. I thought I might submit this based on the feedback I get on this site. Does the frame work? Have I tied the end to the beginning? I also need to add about 150 words. Feel free to tell me where the piece is underdeveloped. I'll thank you in advance for telling me quickly since I have to submit by July 1 and leave for vacation tomorrow. Thanks Mike, whatta, murf! Okay, Roisin, loved your suggestion, too, and had to give it a whirl. Re-edited 10 p.m. June 25.

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