Lore of the Ferali: The Books of Blood - Book 1 - Scion's Raven (Revised)

A fragile young tribal outcast scratches out a meek existence on the edge of a great village of warriors, but the force of the torrents of fate and fortune will soon alter her path. A ghostly raven draws her towards a dangerous future, and she must decide how far she is willing to follow it. Please just let me know whatever you think or find in the text that needs attention. Thank you in advance for reading for me.

• Chapter 1 - Thrice Cursed"The young female outcast of..."