Don't Call Me Princess

Princess Ariella is caught between the expectations of her family and the love she finds with a common boy. All feedback welcome. If ANYTHING doesn't seem awesome, please say so. I've written so many different versions of the beginning that it's hard for me to know what works anymore. Please be extra critical. As a side note. This is not historical fiction. It takes place in a made up place and an unspecific time.

• Chapter 1 - The Gardener - Rewrite"Rewriting the beginning to ..."
• Chapter 1 - ALTERNATE Ch 1"Ok. I took my new first cha..."
• Chapter 2 - The room"This chapter is mostly the ..."
• Chapter 3 - The Door"This starts with the end of..."
• Chapter 4 - Discovery"All feedback welcome."
• Chapter 5 - Sixteen"All feedback welcome. Pleas..."
• Chapter 6 - Highest Bidder"Ella and Gavin discover tha..."
• Chapter 7 - An Evening Out"Ella and Gavin attend a com..."
• Chapter 8 - Unwelcome"All feedback welcome."
• Chapter 9 - Mia's Engagement"Awkward encounter within th..."
• Chapter 10 - Another Dance"Tension between Ella and Ga..."
• Chapter 11 - Caught"Ella and Gavin's exploits a..."
• Chapter 12 - A Mother's Remedy"Ella deals with the afterma..."
• Chapter 13 - Time"Ella starts living her life..."
• Chapter 14 - Return"Gavin returns. It is not a ..."
• Chapter 15 - Saying No"Ella sneaks out, is attacke..."
• Chapter 16 - Giving Orders"Ariella finally finds a use..."
• Chapter 17 - Princess Ari"Ella takes her life into he..."
• Chapter 18 - Misunderstanding"Though Ella has rejected Je..."
• Chapter 19 - Looking for a Fight"Ella goes into the village ..."
• Chapter 20 - Letting Go"Ella's argument with Gavin ..."