RUN BAREFOOT ON CACTUS

Run Barefoot on Cactus is a journey of love, betrayal, death and renewal. It all happened a short three month adventure in lower Baja Mexico. Because I am both the writer and protagonist of this true adventure, I question is if this story will have appeal to readers and what my target audience might be. Does the first chapter work? Would readers want more?

• Chapter 1 - Jump starts and warnings"They say the journey of a t..."
• Chapter 2 - pony rides and fear"any and all comments are in..."
• Chapter 3 - more than dollar tree glasses"Thanks one and all for the ..."
• Chapter 4 - federalie chase"I need to know if this stor..."
• Chapter 5 - Diablo Blanko's rage"Looking for any words of wi..."
• Chapter 6 - Mango for two"Dear readers I know it's ha..."
• Chapter 7 - JOY RIDE"The nits and suggestions ha..."
• Chapter 8 - highway to hell"Another short chapter. Let ..."
• Chapter 9 - Juan"Dear readers I know some of..."
• Chapter 10 - ALONG COMES A STRANGER"hit me with anything. I fee..."
• Chapter 11 - fire and ice"This was supposed to be the..."
• Chapter 12 - storms"Any nits and comments welco..."
• Chapter 13 - Jester boots"This chapter includes a lot..."
• Chapter 14 - call home"any feedback is a help. Don..."
• Chapter 15 - Who where when?"Still open to any and all s..."
• Chapter 16 - cat away"I can use all the nits and ..."
• Chapter 17 - policia and threats"You'll be glad to know that..."
• Chapter 18 - flee the journey"This is the last chapter of..."