The Girl with Green Hair

I've started over, but I haven't republished anything yet. I welcome reviews, but right now I'm still spitballing - don't have a plot worked out and don't have a timeline. I do have characters and a setting and a theme, and I'm planning to write about them until a story shows up. Hope it works. I'm pretty happy with the first six chapters, and I've disabled the rest.

• Chapter 1 - Marion (edited 11/26)"Just polished this a bit an..."
• Chapter 2 - Danny (Edited 11/26)"Changed the ordering, rewro..."
• Chapter 3 - Rules (Edited 11/26)"Partly new. Any and all fee..."
• Chapter 4 - Candy's List (Edited 11/26)"Some new, some old. Thank y..."
• Chapter 5 - Almost Saved (Edited 11/26)"Not many changes - just in ..."
• Chapter 6 - Ratings (Edited 11/26)"Thank you for any and all f..."
• Chapter 7 - Making it real (new on 11/28)"Not thrilled with this chap..."
• Chapter 8 - Stinson Mountain"Not happy with this one yet..."