LOST IN TRANSITION

Lost In Transition is the story about relationships. It is the story of a non traditional family whose Father is in the process of gender transformation to become a woman, while his wife is becoming a man. Caught in between is a precocious 13yr old girl who cannot stand either of them. Believe it or not, this story is based on a true life family in Wyoming. It is a tragic story in reality, but I have chosen to lighten it up and it is largely a sarcastic comedy told from the POV of the teen daughter Christye. My primary concern here is that Christye sounds like and acts like her age, and not that of a man of any age. I would like to know if my story is compelling. If it hooks you, what hooked you? What works and what doesn't? If you would like to edit as well, I would be happy to learn from you. Hopefully it won't be too much of a mess. This is my attempt to return to the group after a long absence, and I appreciate any and all readers. Cheers, Lost Soul

• Chapter 1 - Honey we need to talk"Okay people, here is the se..."
• Chapter 2 - Blue Steak at the Brown Bear Diner"For those of you who read t..."
• Chapter 3 - Dysfunctional is the New Functional"Here is the revised version..."
• Chapter 4 - Ouija"Okay, here is the rewrite ..."
• Chapter 5 - Rent-a-Life"Here is the rewrite of this..."
• Chapter 6 - Far From Reality"After reading all of your a..."
• Chapter 7 - Ten Things to NOT DO with your Transgendered Dad"Hello All, here is the r..."
• Chapter 8 - Lost In Transmission"Here is the new version, 11..."
• Chapter 9 - The Snoops Have an Oops "Lost In Transition is the s..."
• Chapter 10 - Mistaken Identity"Okay, here is the new versi..."
• Chapter 11 - The Next Best Thing to an Orgy "Lost In Transition is the s..."
• Chapter 12 - To Grandmother's House We Go"I had a really tough time w..."
• Chapter 13 - That Little Bitch"I need to know if this chap..."
• Chapter 14 - Stop Your Scrying"I would like to know if thi..."
• Chapter 15 - A Trip in the ER "Lost In Transition is the s..."
• Chapter 16 - Hello my name is Jasmine"I wanted this chapter, the ..."
• Chapter 17 - Hello my name is Christye "Lost In Transition is the s..."
• Chapter 18 - What's up Doc?"Things are about to get sup..."
• Chapter 19 - "Get Out!""As things heat up between J..."
• Chapter 20 - School Daze"As things get more serious ..."
• Chapter 21 - Lost and Found Part One"Okay, this is the pivetal c..."
• Chapter 22 - Lost and Found Part Two"I didn't realize I had run ..."
• Chapter 23 - "Something crazy happened to me the other day.""This is an important chapte..."
• Chapter 24 - The Next Day"Christye wakes up very conf..."
• Chapter 25 - George and Gregory Have Fun"More insight into who the b..."
• Chapter 26 - Freaky Reiki"I'm not sure this chapter b..."
• Chapter 27 - The Next Illogical Step (My house for a penis)"Christye finds out that Jas..."
• Chapter 28 - BYOT (Bring your own Transvestite)"Christye gets invited to a ..."
• Chapter 29 - Reality Bites (The morning after the party)"Christye wakes up with a ha..."
• Chapter 30 - The Bad Mother and the Good Sister"Jasmine is beginning to inv..."
• Chapter 31 - What Really Happened at the Book Store?"Jasmine finally tells Rober..."
• Chapter 32 - The Long Goodbye"Had a hard time writing thi..."
• Chapter 33 - What Carmen Did..."Carmen takes matters into h..."
• Chapter 34 - Redemption"Here is the end. Let me kno..."