BLUE RAIN Reformatted

This is just a piece for all who have moments of separation from hope. If you have read and reviewed this.. I just want to know if format better. comment in forum ... The format was not like my own work so I finally went back and reformatted in to verses and changed a few simple words. I tried to single space it but it still appears double? Does the double spacing hurt it? Again ... if you have reviewed this before. Just leave comment in forum. We have so many new members that I would love to have feedback from some of them. This most likely will be the first piece I 'send out' haaaaaa... I know! I am such a wimp! I don't even care if I get rejected so why the fear? Just me!

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