-SAVING CLEO-

This is the story on which I've based the novel Good at Dying, posted here on TNBW. Originally, I wrote the story in first person and have posted it here under the title -Going Places-. For purposes of Good at Dying, I revised it into 2nd person. I am now thinking of replacing the 2nd person iteration of the story in Good at Dying with this iteration of mixed 2nd and 1st person. I'd love feedback from any soul sedulous enough to now have read all four of the 1)Saving Cleo in 2nd person; 2) Going Places; 3)- SAVING CLEO - in mixed 1st and 2nd persons; the first chapter of Good at Dying.