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For Rlvs, whose challenge to write something about animals I did not see until the contest was over. Inspired by Flowing Pencil who telescoped two poems into one (separated here like yolks from egg whites) and believes haiku should create a mood, an atmosphere, not try to tell a story. In your feedback, if any, please say why you think the haiku pattern works or does not work in English.

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