Clouds Edited/Republished

Want to perfect a few pieces to send out! Please be tough as want what I submit to be the best I can make it. way of escaping. child within creativity imagination Is this better. Improvement in use of tenses punctuation etc How does it make you feel? Does it stir the child within? If you have already reviewed this... you can simply let me know in a forum if you feel I am making progress in my writing.

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