Ragged Edges

All feedback is welcome. Technical is desired as weak point. This is a simple piece about 'feelings' I know! Overdone subject but alas.. they do follow us closely. This is a piece that took two minutes and to be honest have no idea where it came from. This is how I write. I cannot 'create' like so many of the talented writers on this site. Why my work is sporadic.

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