Hardware

I'm reworking this novel, which was written for the Romantic Suspense Genre. I'm trying to keep the suspense going. I also want to deepen the characters and show more of their responses.
THOUGHTS ARE NO LONGER IN ITALICS. IT GURGLE-FURGLES MY POSTINGS (DOUBLES UP EACH PARAGRAPH AFTER THE ITALICS).
Is there enough intrigue to keep you interested?
I know people need points for posting, but please, DO NOT LEAVE ME A DRIVE-BY REVIEW. I NEVER do drive-by reviews, so I don't appreciate them. Thank you.
Some Patois is included in the language.
All currency is Jamaican dollars - Exchange rate is US$1.00:$J90.00

• Chapter 1 - A Curious Encounter"A real estate deal threaten..."
• Chapter 2 - Addled"Camille agrees to a date wi..."
• Chapter 3 - Stymied"Camille resolves to stay aw..."
• Chapter 4 - A Brush With Murder"The owner of the hardware Q..."
• Chapter 5 - Isolation"The police call Quinn in fo..."
• Chapter 6 - A Health Scare"Camille withdraws money at ..."
• Chapter 7 - Hither, Thither & Yon"The police call in Camille...."
• Chapter 8 - Outwitted"Camille runs into Quinn aga..."
• Chapter 9 - Under Siege"Quinn scouts out the territ..."
• Chapter 10 - The Date"Camille is in a snit. "
• Chapter 11 - Floored"Penny has a run-in with Lan..."
• Chapter 12 - Bungling"Quinn loses twice."
• Chapter 13 - Detention"Quinn is detained. "
• Chapter 14 - In the Dog House"Camille tries to get back i..."
• Chapter 15 - Kidnapped"Uncle Travis goes missing. ..."
• Chapter 16 - The Rescue"Camille goes to Travis' res..."
• Chapter 17 - Depressed"Quinn finds out a thing or ..."
• Chapter 18 - Crises"The police question Quinn a..."
• Chapter 19 - Rough Treatment"Camille becomes a target. "
• Chapter 20 - Suicide"Camille and Quinn spend tim..."
• Chapter 21 - Exposed"Travis is exposed."
• Chapter 22 - In Love"Camille makes a startling d..."
• Chapter 23 - Connecting Stray Dots"Quinn connects some dots. "
• Chapter 24 - Panic"Quinn confirms his suspicio..."
• Chapter 25 - Setting Things Straight"Camille helps Uncle Travis ..."
• Chapter 26 - Making Plans"New information comes to li..."
• Chapter 27 - Down Time"Quinn and Camille enjoy eac..."
• Chapter 28 - Consummation - STRONG SEXUAL CONTENT"Camille & Quinn consummate ..."
• Chapter 29 - A Sudden Ending"On problem is solved. "
• Chapter 30 - Pissed"Quinn tees off this father...."
• Chapter 31 - Stabbed"Quinn gets stabbed."
• Chapter 32 - Answers"Camille gets the answers to..."
• Chapter 33 - A Jealous Snit"Crystal shows her hand. Ca..."
• Chapter 34 - Exonerated"Camille comes face-to-face ..."
• Chapter 35 - All's Well That Ends Well"Quinn and Camille get busy. "
• Chapter 36 - Epilogue"We see the love birds a yea..."