Cassie

I wrote this while going through my divorce a couple of years ago. It was a great catharsis but I am not sure about the writing. The initiating event was taken from my work as an air traffic controller. I just built a story around it. Feedback on characters and whether or not they need to be developed further would be appreciated. And just overall feedback about the story would be great also.

• Chapter 1 - Chapter 1"love, romance, erotica, air..."
• Chapter 2 - Chapter 2"Cassie gets to meet John in..."
• Chapter 3 - Chapter 3"John and Cassie get to spen..."
• Chapter 4 - Chapter 4"John's POV "
• Chapter 5 - Chapter 5 First person"I changed this into 1st per..."
• Chapter 6 - Chapter 6 1st person"Rewritten in 1st person. Ca..."
• Chapter 7 - Chapter 7 first person"Recombined a little of Chap..."
• Chapter 8 - Chapter 8 1st person"This is from John's pov. I ..."
• Chapter 9 - Chapter 9 1st person"Changed some chapters aroun..."
• Chapter 10 - Chapter 10 1st person"John and Cassie spend the d..."
• Chapter 11 - Chapter 11 first person"Cassie and Sam meet Josh. "
• Chapter 12 - Chapter 12 First person"Josh and Cassie get to know..."
• Chapter 13 - Chapter 13 first person"John gets moved in. "
• Chapter 14 - Chapter 14 First person"Cassie and John get some al..."
• Chapter 15 - Chapter 15 1st person"Some family time. "
• Chapter 16 - Chapter 16 1st person"Trouble in paradise"
• Chapter 17 - Chapter 17 1st person"Cassie does some soul searc..."
• Chapter 18 - Chapter 18 1st person"Cassie makes the big gesture"
• Chapter 19 - Chapter 19 1st person"The Day of Flight goes off ..."
• Chapter 20 - Epilogue 1st person"Everything all wrapped up i..."
• Chapter 79 - Epilogue"I know this is full of pass..."
• Chapter 80 - Chapter 1 Original Version Edited 4/27"Cut some more stuff out. Ti..."
• Chapter 81 - Chapter 2 Edited 5/02"Cassie meets the pilot of t..."
• Chapter 82 - Chapter 3 Edited 4/22"John gets to see the school..."
• Chapter 83 - Chapter 4 Third person"A little perspective from J..."
• Chapter 84 - Chapter 5- Third person"John and Cassie discover th..."
• Chapter 85 - Chapter 6 Part 1"John and Cassie give in to ..."
• Chapter 86 - Chapter 6 Part 2"John and cassie give in to ..."
• Chapter 87 - Old Chapter 7 Edited 4/15"Rewrite. Took out the phone..."
• Chapter 88 - Chapter 8 Edited 4/15"split this chapter in two. ..."
• Chapter 89 - Chapter 9 Edited 4/15"I split this off from the c..."
• Chapter 90 - Chapter 10"Cassie and John define thei..."
• Chapter 91 - Chapter 11"John and Cassie get more th..."
• Chapter 92 - Chapter 12, Part 1"The beginning of chapter 12..."
• Chapter 93 - Chapter 12, Part 2"Once again the chapter was ..."
• Chapter 93 - Chapter 13"John gets moved in. Cassie'..."
• Chapter 94 - Chapter 14"John and Cassie get some al..."
• Chapter 95 - Chapter 15-Just some family time"John and Cassie's relations..."
• Chapter 96 - Chapter 16"Trouble in paradise. Will l..."
• Chapter 97 - Chapter 17"Cassie has some decisions t..."
• Chapter 98 - Chapter 18"Cassie and John come to an ..."
• Chapter 99 - Chapter 19"Everything all tied up in a..."