Blood of Silverheart: Echoes of the Hunted

Here's what I hope is the beginning of the last edit (pre-publishing-wise), so what do you think? Would you check it out at the library? Buy a copy? Are the characters well defined? How's the pacing?

• Chapter 1 - Blood of Silverheart: Echoes of the Hunted"Here's what I hope is the b..."
• Chapter 2 - Cirlcle of Stones"Ellia, one of the MC's is a..."
• Chapter 3 - Late Bloomer (part one)"In this chapter you meet El..."
• Chapter 4 - Late Bloomer (part 2)"This is the part of the cha..."