Foreboding

This is my first attempt at a Haiku. As always, ANY feedback is greatly appreciated. By the way, since I predict I'm going to get a lot more questions on this by reviewers who have not done their Haiku homework, according to wiki, the Japanese count a long vowel syllable as two and a short vowel syllable as one. Thanks in advance!

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