Lost Soul and Back Again revised edition 3-16-09

Okay, I am going to try to give this a run again after taking a nine month break which resulted in a forey into humor writing. This is the third time I have changed my opening chapter. I need to know if this hooks you or not. Any ideas and nits are appreciated. Happy Reading, Lost Soul

• Chapter 1 - Horse's Ass and Mutha F., Go Under the Scalpel 3-16-09"Okay, I am going to try to ..."
• Chapter 2 - The Boy in the Rain revised 3-19-09"In my short tenure as a fir..."
• Chapter 3 - Monster Under My Bed"Some time ago I was surpris..."
• Chapter 4 - The Nod"This is a short chapter abo..."
• Chapter 5 - It's a deer, it's a plane, no it's...a person?"This is one sunny afternoon..."
• Chapter 6 - Life in the ER (Beyond Courage)"Here's a short story about ..."
• Chapter 7 - My Own Pamplona"I switched gears here a lit..."