- Saving Cleo -

This is the story on which I've based the novel Good at Dying, posted here on TNBW. It is an excerpt taken in whole from the novel. Originally, I wrote the story in first person and have posted it here under the title -Going Places-. For purposes of Good at Dying, I revised it into 2nd person. I'd like any feedback you can offer; I'd love feedback from any soul sedulous enough to now read or who has ever read all three of 1) Saving Cleo; 2) Going Places; the first chapter of Good at Dying.