SCRATCHING AGAINST CARDBOARD

This is the seventh entry in a nine-round competition. I thought I'd try something different this time around where I introduce the line of a poem in the first segment, relay a dream in the second, introduce a conflict in the third and tie them all together in the last segment. Does this work? Thanks for any help you can provide. I'm convinced this judge hates my work. Gale

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