Chalk

I'd like any constructive edits, particularly ones that will help me pinpoint weaknesses and improve my writing. Also, I need feedback on the title. I love and hate it. What do you think?

• Chapter 1 - Daphne"This is a rewrite. I'm mos..."
• Chapter 2 - Daschall"Dialog is always difficult ..."
• Chapter 3 - Phoebe"I'm looking for feedback on..."
• Chapter 4 - Whispers"This chapter is completely ..."
• Chapter 5 - Sisters"The second half of this cha..."
• Chapter 6 - Missing"Rewritten 7-19. If you hav..."
• Chapter 7 - Leaving "I'd like any constructive e..."
• Chapter 8 - Jack"This is rough. I'd love gr..."
• Chapter 9 - Miranda"The physical elements of th..."
• Chapter 10 - Nausea"This was a problem chapter ..."
• Chapter 11 - Feared "I'd like any constructive e..."
• Chapter 12 - Chalk"So, I haven't been to the c..."
• Chapter 13 - Blood"I mostly need to know if Da..."
• Chapter 14 - More Blood"Rewrite again."
• Chapter 15 - Killer"I did change a few things i..."
• Chapter 16 - Life "I'd like any constructive e..."