Werewolves in the Garden

REVISED AGAIN! I'm still working on removing the excess of the use of 'was'. Is clear which he is who? LOL. This is a story of a woman who doesn't what is real and what isn't. Suggestions for the re-write welcome. I would love to make it tighter and smoother. I am still struggling with the tense issue as well. Sigh. I'm getting there. Thanks for all your help!

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