This Time You Lose

Lisa Kaamp operates a small childcare business out of her home in the sleepy little town of Nogeksum, Michigan. Highly respected and known for going the extra mile for her daycare kids, Lisa thought she had handled every daycare emergency possible. But nothing prepared her for the nightmare she now faced. Lisa awakes one morning to find herself bound and gagged, four strange men in her home, and the daycare children being held hostage in the next room. Terrorized by her captors as the authorities work to meet the ransom deadline, she tries negotiating with the men for the release of the children, and soon realizes that at least one of them has no intention of letting anyone go. With the deadline quickly approaching, Lisa must do the unimaginable to protect the children and get everyone out alive.

• Chapter 1 - This Time You Lose -- Chapter 1"Lisa Kaamp operates a small..."
• Chapter 2 - This Time You Lose -- Chapter 2"Short chapter. Diane is the..."
• Chapter 3 - This Time You Lose -- Chapter 3"All feedback is welcome, bu..."
• Chapter 4 - This Time You Lose -- Chapter 4"This chapter is from Jimmy'..."
• Chapter 5 - This Time You Lose -- Chapter 5"Any and all feedback is wel..."
• Chapter 6 - This Time You Lose -- Chapter 6"Any and all advice is welcome!"
• Chapter 7 - This Time You Lose -- Chapter 7"Just a short chapter this t..."
• Chapter 8 - This Time You Lose -- Chapter 8 "Lisa Kaamp operates a small..."
• Chapter 9 - This Time You Lose -- Chapter 9 "Lisa Kaamp operates a small..."
• Chapter 10 - This Time You Lose -- Chapter 10"Short chapter this time... ..."
• Chapter 11 - This Time You Lose -- Chapter 11"I know I have some work to ..."
• Chapter 12 - This Time You Lose -- Chapter 12"Does this chapter flow real..."
• Chapter 13 - This Time You Lose -- Chapter 13"A lot in this chapter. Do y..."
• Chapter 14 - This Time You Lose -- Chapter 14"I introduce a new viewpoint..."
• Chapter 15 - This Time You Lose -- Chapter 15"Trying to lighten the mood ..."
• Chapter 16 - This Time You Lose -- Chapter 16"Does the conversation betwe..."
• Chapter 17 - This Time You Lose -- Chapter 17"Any and all suggestions wel..."
• Chapter 18 - This Time You Lose -- Chapter 18"Trying to raise the tension..."
• Chapter 19 - This Time You Lose -- Chapter 19"Added a bit more backstory ..."
• Chapter 20 - This Time You Lose -- Chapter 20"Any and all suggestions for..."
• Chapter 21 - This Time You Lose -- Chapter 21"Building tension again. Is ..."
• Chapter 22 - This Time You Lose -- Chapter 22"Looking for critique on the..."
• Chapter 23 - This Time You Lose -- Chapter 23"Sorry for the wait! Let me ..."
• Chapter 24 - This Time You Lose -- Chapter 24"Trying to fill in some of t..."
• Chapter 25 - This Time You Lose -- Chapter 25"Back to Lisa's viewpoint ag..."
• Chapter 26 - This Time You Lose -- Chapter 26"Trying to build tension aga..."
• Chapter 27 - This Time You Lose -- Chapter 27"Does the transition from Li..."
• Chapter 28 - This Time You Lose -- Chapter 28"Another short chapter. Jimm..."
• Chapter 29 - This Time You Lose -- Chapter 29"Another short chapter. Lisa..."
• Chapter 30 - This Time You Lose -- Chapter 30"Looking for feedback on dia..."
• Chapter 31 - This Time You Lose -- Chapter 31"Trying to raise the tension..."
• Chapter 32 - This Time You Lose -- Chapter 32"This chapter is from Jimmy'..."
• Chapter 33 - This Time You Lose -- Chapter 33"Is this believable? I had ..."
• Chapter 34 - This Time You Lose -- Chapter 34"Does this chapter build add..."
• Chapter 35 - This Time You Lose -- Chapter 35"Building toward the climax ..."