PINK MURDERS

I am adding to my collection of reject slips on this one. I posted first draft chapters a while ago but I guess I need to re-write the re-written version. All comments suggestions and edits gratefully accepted. I will be posting chapters at one or two per week (not to bump others) for the next 20 or so weeks.

• Chapter 1 - Folded dreams"Does this beginning have en..."
• Chapter 2 - Welcome to the good life"All comments suggestions an..."
• Chapter 3 - Penthouse problems"Great helpful reviews on th..."
• Chapter 4 - Urban Jungle"Thanks to all the reviewers..."
• Chapter 5 - Dead drunk"Bob blows a fuse, Pat shows..."
• Chapter 6 - Far from the eyes"We learn more about Beaudry..."
• Chapter 7 - The Big Bitch"Beaudry is falling apart, t..."
• Chapter 8 - An expensive meal"So far the characters are d..."
• Chapter 9 - Stakeout stories"I am posting this version t..."
• Chapter 10 - Bullets from Beirut"I am posting this version t..."
• Chapter 11 - Hi tech tail"Thanks for all the previous..."
• Chapter 12 - gay pick up"Not too sure on this one, s..."