A Quaint Device

Jason knows his Shakespeare. He can recite every word of every play, every scrap of history, every syllable of criticism that’s referenced the Bard of Avon. But Jason has just discovered a world within our own, where monsters and murderers hunt for a powerful treasure missing for the last four hundred years. This is more-or-less finished piece. I'm looking for reactions as well as plot holes, inconsistencies, and anything else that can polish this into a better story.

• Chapter 1 - One "Jason knows his Shakespeare..."
• Chapter 2 - Two "Jason knows his Shakespeare..."
• Chapter 3 - Three"While they're divide, Chapt..."
• Chapter 4 - Chapter Three Part Two"Chapter Three Part 1 and Ch..."
• Chapter 5 - Four"The formatting seems to get..."
• Chapter 6 - Five"Due to some lapse of attent..."
• Chapter 7 - Six "Jason knows his Shakespeare..."
• Chapter 8 - Seven Part One"Maxed out the word count on..."
• Chapter 9 - Seven Part Two"Maxed out the word count an..."
• Chapter 10 - Eight "Jason knows his Shakespeare..."
• Chapter 11 - Nine "Jason knows his Shakespeare..."
• Chapter 12 - Ten "Jason knows his Shakespeare..."
• Chapter 13 - Eleven "Jason knows his Shakespeare..."
• Chapter 14 - Twelve "Jason knows his Shakespeare..."
• Chapter 15 - Thirteen "Jason knows his Shakespeare..."
• Chapter 16 - Fourteen "Jason knows his Shakespeare..."
• Chapter 17 - Fifteen "Jason knows his Shakespeare..."
• Chapter 18 - Sixteen Part One "Jason knows his Shakespeare..."
• Chapter 19 - Sixteen Part Two "Jason knows his Shakespeare..."