Chase your Dreams

This is actually a novella that I'm working on for my correspondance course. It was supposed to be a short story, but I feel I can't do the story I have in my mind justice by limiting the length of it. Some of you helped me on it when I was getting the first part ready to submit to my correspondance course mentor. She liked all the discriptive passages I had in the beginning of it, but felt I should start it right as Liliana enters the kitchen after watching Sunraiders morning workout. Please let me know what you feel needs to be added to this scene and if I made Liliana sound 15 years old that was raised to respect her parents. Thanks in advance. You all rock!!! Edit: I readded a revised portion of the old beginning to the story and did a rehaul of the breakfast scene.

• Chapter 1 - Chase your Dreams"This is actually a novella ..."
• Chapter 2 - Truce"An accident happens that ca..."
• Chapter 3 - The Plan"Does this chapter continue ..."