Death of Darkness

I am sending this out to agents after editng the novel. I believe there are eagle-eyed readers that may find a nit, or many of them. I am going blind looking for them. So thanks ahead of time. The novel is set in China between the two World Wars. Lots of kungfu action. The historical period is accurately portrayed. Li Ma is blind and the leader of the School of the Blind Masseurs. Originally posted with 100k, but cut to <70,000. I have book two started.

• Chapter 1 - Ba Ba and Li Ma"The children of destiny are..."
• Chapter 2 - Cixi and Li Ma"The Empress Dowager Cixi [p..."
• Chapter 3 - Li Ma Goes To Shanghai"Li Ma and his father travel..."
• Chapter 4 - Intermezzo"I place this Intermezzo bet..."
• Chapter 5 - The Last Emperor"Two section chapter. The fi..."
• Chapter 6 - The Shanghai Jewish School (Edited May 23)"Another two pane chapter. ..."
• Chapter 7 - Miko [edited May 27]"Miko enters the home of Eth..."
• Chapter 8 - Miko Remembers"The flashback. The scene ta..."
• Chapter 9 - Homer Lea"Miko has a conversation wit..."
• Chapter 10 - Li Ma and Miko"Multi-pane chapter. First p..."
• Chapter 11 - Bao Chen [pt. one]"Another chapter with sever..."
• Chapter 11 - Bao Chen [pt. two]"The ending to chapter eleve..."
• Chapter 12 - Rivka and Kinigl"Rivka meets Ba Ba. Ha! You'..."
• Chapter 13 - Rivka and Kinigl Fall in Love"Title says it all! A touch ..."
• Chapter 14 - Rivka and Ba Ba"Action-packed chapter. Kini..."
• Chapter 15 - Charles and Emily"New characters"
• Chapter 16 - Intermezzo - Boats of the Kau Sai"Ba Ba and his father, the M..."
• Chapter 17 - The Last Emperor and Michelle"A long chapter that will ne..."
• Chapter 17 - The Last Emperor and Michelle [pt. two]"Michelle and JP Morgan - a ..."
• Chapter 18 - The Mo Gui King and Michelle"Gulp! Michelle meets the Ts..."
• Chapter 19 - The Hawk"Michelle finds out she will..."
• Chapter 20 - Intermezzo - Three"Attack of the Mo Gui. "
• Chapter 21 - Shanghai Nights"Miko, Charles, Emily, Kinig..."
• Chapter 22 - The End of Book One"This is it! Li Ma and Ba Ba..."