Rick and Bobo

Rick and Bobo - Two brothers: one a genius, one not. -- What would you do if you suddenly had way too much money? After the usual thrills, if you got bored enough, and happened to be two movie fanatic brothers, you might just try to become a superhero. -- -- This is a 100k word superhero/comedy adventure and is the first in a 4 book series. In addition to critiquing the content, if you find any typos or grammatical errors, please let me know. -- -- This story is written in 3rd perso omni, although I have brought my narrator in too late. That being said, if you notice any pov issues that sound awkward even though there is a narrator, please point them out, and if you would, suggest a fix. Thank you!

• Chapter 1 - The Whiz-ard"This story is written in 3r..."
• Chapter 2 - The Whiz-ard - cont'd "Rick and Bobo - Two brother..."
• Chapter 3 - Hot dogs "Rick and Bobo - Two brother..."
• Chapter 4 - Hot dogs - cont'd "Rick and Bobo - Two brother..."
• Chapter 5 - Disgusting Blob "Rick and Bobo - Two brother..."
• Chapter 6 - Disgusting Blob - cont'd "Rick and Bobo - Two brother..."
• Chapter 7 - Dynamic Prophylactic "Rick and Bobo - Two brother..."
• Chapter 8 - Dynamic Prophylactic - cont'd "Rick and Bobo - Two brother..."
• Chapter 9 - Free Radicals "Rick and Bobo - Two brother..."
• Chapter 10 - Free Radicals - cont'd "Rick and Bobo - Two brother..."
• Chapter 11 - Clever Protector "Rick and Bobo - Two brother..."
• Chapter 12 - Clever Protector - cont'd "Rick and Bobo - Two brother..."
• Chapter 13 - Demon or Alien "Rick and Bobo - Two brother..."
• Chapter 14 - Miserable Monster "Rick and Bobo - Two brother..."
• Chapter 15 - Miserable Monster - cont'd "Rick and Bobo - Two brother..."
• Chapter 16 - Junior "Rick and Bobo - Two brother..."
• Chapter 17 - Junior - cont'd "Rick and Bobo - Two brother..."
• Chapter 18 - Corpus Delecti "Rick and Bobo - Two brother..."
• Chapter 19 - Corpus Delecti - cont'd "Rick and Bobo - Two brother..."