Buzz (OOB #4)
Written by: new_england
This vignette is the fourth in a collection of pieces with common characters. It is set in Old Orchard Beach, Maine's, amusement park by the sea. "Buzz" is a coming-of-age tale of a boy's first experience with (too much) alcohol. I'm looking for overall reactions and value advice on words and lines that are especially effective or not so effective. Thanks. -- NE
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