Linda Cartagena

Street names in this piece have been left blank to thwart private investigators. As further stories are delivered off the cuff, I am happy to hear about where commas are needed, etc., and I take all this advice into account. This adobe does need a little more baking. What I am more interested in knowing if I am 1.) portraying an accurate portrait of a livable and living city, in this case Boston, Mass. and 2.) describing characters that are believable in situations that are beleivable.

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