The Consultant

In his struggle to save his company, a young chief executive ends up fighting to save his life. This near future tale addresses the key elements of what constitute real power in society, loyalty and honour as opposed to money and violence. ************* I am looking for feedback on individual chapters, especially ones that haven't received any reviews. On things like grammer, structure, character and dialogue, as well as an indication of where the chapter stands on the boring barometre. (Revised Title; 16/02/08)

• Chapter 1 - prologue - Intercept the Wet Sparrow"The war of the gangs begins. "
• Chapter 2 - The Corporate Prince"James Tucker meets Freddie ..."
• Chapter 3 - Mercurex"A day at the office for Jam..."
• Chapter 4 - Black Market"A corporate thug at work."
• Chapter 5 - Zenith"Tucker exhausts all his ave..."
• Chapter 6 - Golden and West Quay"Tucker and Jackson strike u..."
• Chapter 7 - Freeze Out"The point of no return..."
• Chapter 8 - Mr. Peterson Gets Boxed"Introducing Necroface...."
• Chapter 9 - Infiltrator"The purge of MercurEx begin..."
• Chapter 10 - Union Astra"The bribery begins..."
• Chapter 11 - Barbarians"Shackleton confronts Lewis...."
• Chapter 12 - Blackwell Blackmailed"The blackmail begins...."