Jack and Jane Went Up a Cliff

Reposted March 5, 2008 This story has been edited since it was originally posted, the first thing I ever posted on this site. The original reviews ranged from 1 thru 5. Most of the advice was great. One review landed on me as a sarcastic rant and it was no help at all. I had mentioned originally that a friend had described this story as creepy and I took that as a compliment.

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