Terrorcruise

Terrorcruise, a science fiction adventure, is the story of Tac-Team Captain Axel Fargo's quest to hunt down and kill the terrorist who murdered Axel's wife- a man the Unity Sphere thinks is dead; the terrorist Hetz, who fell before the Unity Fleet once but survived, thanks to powerful new technology, and is set to resume his murderous ways; and Maurel Bright, daughter of one of the Sphere's most powerful businessmen and a target in her own right, simply for being who she is. Terrorcruise is a finished novel in the 105,000 word range. I have never presented it for review in its entirety before and as I earn the credits, hope to post it here for your critiquing pleasure. Any criticism, good or bad, will be appreciated.

• Chapter 1 - Prologue"Hetz, now operating at the ..."
• Chapter 1 - Chapter One"Six years after the inciden..."
• Chapter 2 - Chapter Two"In the escaping shuttle, He..."
• Chapter 3 - Chapter Three"Axel, restless as the assau..."
• Chapter 4 - Chapter Four"Axel and his Tac-team retur..."
• Chapter 5 - Chapter Five"Captain Fargo's insistence ..."
• Chapter 6 - Chapter Six"Maurel Bright is tIred of e..."
• Chapter 7 - Chapter Seven"Hetz pays a visit to a cert..."
• Chapter 8 - Chapter Eight"Axel Fargo, wondering the h..."
• Chapter 9 - Chapter Nine"After speaking again with M..."
• Chapter 10 - Chapter Ten"Axel's connecting flight ar..."
• Chapter 11 - Chapter Eleven"Maurel Bright, enjoying her..."
• Chapter 12 - Chapter Twelve"Hetz arrives at Port Sehera..."
• Chapter 13 - Chapter Thirteen"As the Fringe World cruise ..."
• Chapter 14 - Chapter Fourteen"Hetz, Brayn and another ter..."
• Chapter 15 - Chapter Fifteen"In an effort to settle hims..."
• Chapter 16 - Chapter Sixteen"Axel and Maurel enjoy each ..."
• Chapter 17 - Chapter Seventeen"Axel sneaks into the crew b..."
• Chapter 18 - Chapter Eighteen"Hetz discovers an oddity in..."
• Chapter 19 - Chapter Nineteen"Major Westyr alerts Highcap..."
• Chapter 20 - Chapter Twenty"After hours of fruitless se..."
• Chapter 21 - Chapter Twenty-One"Maurel meets with Axel in t..."
• Chapter 22 - Chapter Twenty-Two"Hetz checks the progress of..."
• Chapter 23 - Chapter Twenty-Three"Axel and Maurel head down t..."
• Chapter 24 - Chapter Twenty-Four"On the command deck, Hetz a..."
• Chapter 25 - Chapter Twenty-Five"Axel flees from the cargo h..."
• Chapter 26 - Chapter Twenty-Six"Hetz realizes he still has ..."
• Chapter 27 - Chapter Twenty-Seven"Maurel and the remaining ki..."
• Chapter 28 - Chapter Twenty-Eight"Though severely injured, Ax..."
• Chapter 29 - Chapter Twenty-Nine"Despite the problems caused..."
• Chapter 30 - Chapter Thirty"In the main hall, Maurel st..."
• Chapter 31 - Chapter Thirty-One"Axel struggles to escape fr..."
• Chapter 32 - Chapter Thirty-Two"Eldril and Phera move to ca..."
• Chapter 33 - Chapter Thirty-Three"Back in the cargo hold comm..."
• Chapter 34 - Chapter Thirty-Four"Mallor comes up with a desp..."
• Chapter 35 - Chapter Thirty-Five"Hetz greets the last group ..."
• Chapter 36 - Chapter Thirty-Six"Maurel struggles to help Ma..."
• Chapter 37 - Chapter Thirty-Seven"Tac-Team Captail Terrill De..."
• Chapter 38 - Chapter Thirty-Eight"Coming to grips with the de..."
• Chapter 39 - Chapter Thirty-Nine"Hetz wakes to find himself ..."
• Chapter 40 - Chapter Forty"Axel frees Maurel from the ..."
• Chapter 41 - Chapter Forty-One"Hetz escapes the predasaur ..."
• Chapter 42 - Chapter Forty-Two"Axel and Maurel make it to ..."
• Chapter 43 - Chapter Forty-Three"Brayn on the cruiser's brid..."
• Chapter 44 - Chapter Forty-Four"Hetz climbs from the cargo ..."
• Chapter 45 - Chapter Forty-Five"Unarmed, Axel confronts Het..."
• Chapter 46 - Chapter Forty-Six"Maurel is startled by the e..."
• Chapter 47 - Chapter Forty-Seven"Hetz joins Maurel on the gr..."
• Chapter 48 - Chapter Forty-Eight"The climactic fight reaches..."
• Chapter 49 - Epilogue"Loose ends are wrapped up. ..."