Borrowed

I pulled this one up from obscurity among post at my own web community. It was written in the way of a rambling, musing rant. I've pulled it up a few times, didn't feel the urg to work on it, let it slide back down to the bottom of the heap... but yesterday seemed just right to pull it up and polish it. Tell me what y'all think of the first attempt.

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