Goodbye Yellow Brick Road, Adieu LA

The story is set in the '50s during the McCarthy era and the reign of the scandal rag, Confidential magazine. The place is Los Angeles, California. The mood of the country is frightened: H-bombs, communists, and scandal. I would like constructive feedback, particularly from those interested in the movie industry during that period, also from those who like the hard-boiled style.

• Chapter 1 - Sam Walls, ex-fighter"This chapter introduces the..."