Slouching Toward Jerusalem - rewrite
Written by: alice in wonderlandzz
I did a rewrite on this to incorporate some of what I've learned so far and fix problems with the POV and theme I had in the first version. Let me know if you think its ready for submission and whether the growth of the main character is believable.
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