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I am hoping this is the final revision. I have made major changes, mostly toward the end of the story. I hope to have some old Callie fans stop by and let me know if they like the changes. I also wish to grab some new readers who will let me know what they think.

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In distopic world following Dec. 21, 2012, were wolves are taking over the planet. Two teenagers journey from their home in the wilderness of British Columbia in search for a mysterious doctor who has discovered a cure. One of the teens, Michael LoPinto, has been bitten and time to save him is ticking away. On the next full moon, he'll turn into a wolf and kill his friend, Riko Light. This is a story about friendship and sacrifice in a world gone crazy. I'm writing this for fun and because I always wanted to write a YA piece.

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Hi! I've completed an initial rough draft of this YA story. I'm looking for feedback on flow, consistency, believability and whether or not I'm depicting teenage life accurately.

Many thanks and please note that I reciprocate all reviews.

THE STORY

When 16-year old Grayson Black finds his murdered father's iPod in the garage, his troubled teenage life is suddenly filled with purpose. The tunes evoked by shuffle mode channel his dad's spirit and steer him towards his destiny as a superhero.

Meanwhile, under the cloak of Christianity, the villainous Father Billings exploits Grayson's Mom. Grayson also seeks comfort in the church in the form of Altar Girl Evelyn. As his love for Evelyn grows, secrets about Father Billings are revealed and Grayson, aka Super-G springs into action. In a twisted conclusion, the true heroes and villains aren't who they seem.

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Life hasn't been kind to Janie. She's always wanted to just disappear, and up until now she's managed quite successfully. When Marcus, a popular boy in town shows an interest in her reality shifts and her past comes back intent on killing her.

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**TO MY CURRENT READERS: I've merged a bunch of the opening chapters, and cut down a lot of information to up the pacing.

**SUMMARY: Paige Dylan has Daddy issues, mainly because she has no idea who her father is. When her obsession with all things Mod (Vespas, trench-coats, go-go boots) leads her to a modernist house in Silver Lake, she meets two guys who inadvertently lead her to the answers she’s been searching for: Randy, a forty-two year old film editor, who looks like a rock-n-roll god, and Nathan, a high-school senior desperate to go to architecture school and escape the demands of his dysfunctional household.

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** First draft is complete now we edit. Looking for big picture impressions, and, since this a character driven novel, whether you make a connection with Paige.

PLEASE BEGIN WITH CHAPTER ONE

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Young women are recruited to kidnap twelve year old girls from public places, noone ever hears from them again until one of the girls escapes. To help her deal with her ordeal,she is taken to a psychologist who is a member of the DAR, an ancient society charged with protecting the earth.

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Layne Roberts is a young girl who, through no fault of her own, has always been alone. After she convinces her mom to move her to a new city for a start over, will she finally find what she's looking for? And if she does, will it be everything she always thought it would? Note to reader: I'm doing a little rewriting to get scenes right and to get back into character. If you've read this before, I won't be offended in the slightest if you don't want to read it again.

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I'm working on a new beginning for 'Silver Fleeces' and will be revising the whole thing. I had too many plot elements in the first version so hopefully I'll be more restrained in this version. I'm trying to get into the thoughts of this teenager more. Rather than just being opinionated, I hope she'll be more thoughtful.

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Lexus lives in a world where physical perfection is the norm. A world where everything is first judged by a person's appearance. When this world is jepordized, how far will Perfects go to find the answer to rectify the problem? Follow Lexus as she comes to terms with the unjustness of one world and attemps to find happiness in another. While on the journey she becomes a key player in the Perfect's quest to continue their world, at the expense of hers. This book is being written for the 15-21 year old market.

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This is the first of a The Gifted Trilogy. Three sisters born on the day their mother died. Each possess a rare spiritual gift that alters the way they view life and how they deal with the experiences they're faced with. ************Liar follows Phoebe, a Truth Teller. Where others hear and believe the lies that spew from people's mouths, Phoebe hears the truth behind their words. But when the people around begin telling lies to hide from her, she has to decide which is more important the truth of the situation or alloing her friends to live an illusion.

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Something is killing the flying horses of Tremirson. Milav, powerful Rider of the winged stallion Deryn, is positive that they must take the healthy horses and relocate deeper into the mountains. Jev, Rider of brown stallion Lleu, disagrees. The two men spark a bitter divide within the town. As horses sicken and die, it is left to brothers Daav and Eliv, and the girl they both admire, Kamila, to save Tremirson's herd.

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I have hard skin. I love criticism, lay in on me. Always looking for grammatical issues, cuts suggested to move the story along, POV errors, and tense issues. Thank you...

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This is the sequel to Priscilla the Great. Priscilla is a thirteen year old girl who can shoot fire out of her fingers. Nano is over so now it's time for some serious editing. My agent suggested I split this up into two separate books so I'm slowing down the intro and trying to introduce the characters in separate chapters.

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Obsessive fans and psychotic best friends are set to ruin any plans Annie Townsend has of falling in love. A seventeen year old actress who doesn't do romance lets herself fall into a world she is unprepared for and doesn't know where to draw the line between real life and fantasy. Near fatal accidents and gripping death scenes are happening all around her and they aren't part of any script.

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