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Genre: young adult
|C2||nio16||Novel||0||n/a||Mar 3, 2014|
Summary:Young adult fantasy. This is the second of a series of books which will span Chloe’s years of training to be a Preases protectors of earths dimensions. They each possess an orb that grants them specific powers which they use to defend the earth’s dimensions. The inhabitants are humans mixed with other beings from each of earth’s dimensions. In this book, Chloe rescues a djinn who is now indebted to Chloe and creates an enemy in the djinn that Chloe defeated. As a result, he makes several attempts on her life. Mira also gets a mentor who is also the person behind the disappearances (which will not be revealed until the last book). Sion tries to kill Mira because he doesn't want to be bonded to her and uses the djinn as a scape goat. I would appreciate feedback any other comments that come to mind. I look forward to all constructive criticism! Thank you to everyone who took time to read this.
|Founders||graymartin||Novel||4||n/a||Mar 2, 2014|
Summary:Born a lowly Settler, sixteen-year-old Wil isn't supposed to have the Gift, but he does. Like the Great One himself, he can sift the minds of those around him, probing every hidden thought. The Gift has transformed his life, lifting him from a Settler's Camp to the Guardian Academy - an elite school where children like him learn how to use their power. He's been taught that Guardians are a force for good, charged with protecting the people of Neoden from the evil of selfish thought. But when he and his fellow cadets come under attack, those beliefs shatter. Why would the Settlers he's been sent to protect want to kill him? When a voice from the past reaches out to him, he's forced to face a new and terrifying possibility: maybe powerful evil still exists in the world. And maybe he's becoming a part of it. I'm especially interested to hear whether or not the story, characters and dystopian world hook you. Is the world-building interesting or cliche? Same question for the main characters. Nits, of course, are always welcome! Thanks!
|Dead Girls Never Give Up (Dead Girls series, volume 2)||Susan Stec||Novel||0||n/a||Mar 2, 2014|
Summary:Working title, looking for suggestions. Sara's dead. Her sister is a necromancer. Her grandmother is out to get even and her only two spirited friends are definitely not boyfriend material.
|Amber Eyes.||Mariana Reuter||Novel||1||n/a||Feb 26, 2014|
Summary:After almost being raped at home, a 14 yo girl runs away to her grandmother's only to unveil dark family secrets threatening her and her boyfriend's life.
|Under a Wild and Darkening Sky||Ann Walters||Novel||1||n/a||Feb 22, 2014|
Summary:More of a historical fantasy, this is the third book in my flying horse trilogy, set 12 years after In the Winds of Danger. In this one, Alyna and her brother Ralf move with their family to High Meadow. Alyna is determined to overcome her fear of the flying horses, and Ralf the rebel becomes determined to return the flying horses to Tremeirchson (which they left in Book One: On a Wing and a Dare).
|The NostraBenson Prophecies - v2||Stefanie Dubois||Novel||1||n/a||Feb 18, 2014|
Summary:Growing up the adoptive sons of a derisible psychic is one thing. Having their father's doomsday prediction actually come true is quite another. Brothers, Sam and Micky, survived the disaster only to learn that another is destined but preventable, only if they learn to decode their father's cryptic prophecies.
|Liam's Quest||lucyinthesky||Novel||3||n/a||Feb 17, 2014|
Summary:Young Adult fantasy. Liam's Quest, Annwn Book II, is the sequel to Errant Knight. It takes pieces of the King Arthur legend and fast-forwards about 1,500 years, weaving medieval magic and modern-day romance into an epic adventure. It's been two weeks since Tian and Jordan's wedding. The threat of the black death weighs heavy on everyone's mind, especially Liam's, as he searches for the last stone in the prophecy. Thanks to everyone for all their encouragement and support.
|Missing Lily (formerly 'Letters Never Sent')||Annie K||Novel||0||n/a||Feb 14, 2014|
Summary:Excerpt: Dear Lord Fallon, I’m sure you’re wondering why you’ve received a personal letter bearing the royal crest, so I’ll get right to the point. When I stayed in your home, you knew me as Lily. In actuality, I am Princess Lylin, seventh daughter of His Majesty, King Forrester Milandaro. First allow me to apologize for my deceit. It was unfair of me to take advantage of your gracious hospitality without revealing myself, but let me assure you, I had no sinister intentions. I was only trying to safeguard myself in the best way I knew how. My fear of the unknown propelled me to hide my identity as a means of protection, not only for myself, but for my family as well. It didn’t take me long to realize that I had nothing to fear from you, but I didn’t know how to go about admitting the truth without ruining the friendship we had built. In addition, I did not wish to cause you any undo anxiety or discomfort in knowing that you harbored a member of the royal family. Please know that while I may have changed my name, I was utterly honest otherwise. I sought to tell you as much truth as possible and never lied for the sake of lying. I hold you in the very highest respect and cannot begin to express my gratitude for all that you did for me, for the excellent care and comfort that I received while in your company. Please accept my deepest gratitude. Yours, very gratefully, etc... Princess Lylin Milandaro “Lily”
|REACTION TIME||R. M. Keegan||Novel||0||n/a||Jan 31, 2014|
Summary:The action in this book starts in the fourth chapter but the tension between the two main protagonists starts at the beginning. It works only if the protagonist is strongly enough drawn to interest the reader in her problems. Is she? If not, how can it she be strengthened as a character?
|The Celebrity Gene||J_Teck||Novel||0||n/a||Jan 29, 2014|
Summary:Melanie Reyser is finally ready to confess her true feelings to her best friend, Aaron Price. When a new student suddenly shows up, capturing Aaron's immediate attention, Melanie is crushed. Savannah Dalton is amazingly beautiful and friendly and appears to have it all. But is she hiding something? Savannah will soon introduce both Melanie and Aaron to a twisted world that they never knew existed. Their lives will never be the same. I have really been working on rewrites of a lot of this story and hope you find it much improved!!
|Chloe||nio16||Novel||1||n/a||Jan 26, 2014|
Summary:Young adult fantasy. This is the first of a series of books which will span Chloe’s years of training. She has been selected as a trainee to the Preases who are a group of powerful beings. They each possess an orb that grants them specific powers which they use to defend the earth’s dimensions. The inhabitants are humans mixed with other beings from each of earth’s dimensions. During her first year of training, her best friend is kidnapped and she sets out to rescue her. This is the first in a series of books. The death of her predecessor and the discovering who killed him is the back story that doesn't get resolved until the last book- but each book will provide a small piece of the puzzle. I would like to know if the story is interesting and any creative title ideas (I am at a loss for a good one). I would appreciate feedback any other comments that come to mind. I look forward to all constructive criticism! Thank you to everyone who took time to read this.
|The Ghost Files V3||maryapryl||Novel||6||n/a||Jan 19, 2014|
Summary:After having learned she was stolen from her family, Mattie must face the consequences of that truth while battling a mob of angry ghosts who claim she is responsible for thier death.