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i hope this make some sense.

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For worse poetry bid! Has to be about romance people! A couple of inarticulate rednecks? Seventh graders? May I do myself proud in suckiness. All nitpicky and mean reviews desired!!!!

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Another springtime poem. Comments welcome.

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While thinking about the capacities we have to flourish or wither and die, it occurred to me that it’s really the creative choices we make that determines the concave or convex nature of our lives. Perhaps these few words will provide some contemplation for you as well.

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Everyone loves Spring. Some more than others. Comments welcome.

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I have spoken with trappers who have experienced such events on traplines Hope you enjoy. All reviews are welcomed.

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Found an old textbook, History of Modern Philosophy, while cleaning out a closet. Spent some time chewing the fat with a couple of the boys while I waited for clothes to dry. They helped me with this little poem.

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Mother nature gets her way. What else can one do except enjoy? Spring fever is here.

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Feeling melancholy... back to normal :)

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This came while thinking about how often we allow attachment to the past to hold back our future...until we don't.

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Doing a little carpentry this weekend. Comments welcome.

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Your view is the only view that matters..

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Simple poem, simple message, simple, simple simple

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As the prologue to my novel Mind Puppets, I am curious as to whether it works by itself as a complete poetic styled idea. I've not attempted to construct a poem this way before, so I'd be most appreciative of your feedback.

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This is a bit of nostalgia about returning to my hometown in Massachuetts. It is the source of many of my stories and characters. I owe it a lot. This poem is something else that grew from there.

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Can't really escape it. But one day perhaps we will be free of its clutches.

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Something, I think, everyone goes through once in a while. Any feedback would be great!!!

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This poem's original title was Renewal. Unfortunately, that one has already been used by someone on this site - so, now it's Perennial. This is my first attempt at writing a poem in sonnet form. Comments and critique are appreciated.

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For all of you whose gardening fingers transcend the everyday magic of tilling the Soil, you know how often we are reminded that death is natural and necessary for life to flourish. Hopefully, such understanding will grow some little starters for tomorrow.

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This is my first attempt at poetry in years...I welcome even the most fundamental advice. Interesting that my search for a new and better computer would inspire a poem. It got me thinking how computers capture our senses, attention and time...until they stop working so well, and we start looking at that hot new model that works so much better. The comparison with the dirty old man dumping his old girl for a sweet young thing was too much to resist.

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She's been around for quite some time but I, in my plodding way, just found her. A true poet worthy of much finer tribute than this little verse.

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Just fun. No claim to fame here in my attempts to be a funny poet. No Flowing Pencil to stir the heart and burn the soul with words. Humor in poor form is all I have to offer.

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The Academy Awards partially vindicated itself last night with recognition of fictional truth over political truth--that bottom-line-rule aspect of Hollywood which, more often than not, seems to dominate acknowledgment. With several of the awards, and especially Hurt Locker and Precious, we as writers were left with optimism relative to smaller, important issues receiving the deserved recognition. One could argue that last night suggested The Real Hollywood was made to further contemplate their responsibility to audiences over and above creating "just" worthwhile mainstream entertainment. It could be further argued that the Best Screenplay, Director and Picture served as a worthy model of taste and execution for the ethical future of cinema.

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This arrived during a winter walk in the Brandywine Valley. Comments welcome.

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its coming to that time of year...........

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inspired by Scott Free's poem Spit a ramble into how mankind is always digging for things, probing to find things

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any thoughts are appreciated, a first draft here

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All feedback welcome

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Observations from someplace unimportant

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Hunting has long been a part of the American natural world. A whole lot of folks don't like it. I don't do it anymore. Comments welcome.

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This is the girl's version of "IF YOU WERE NOT A BOY". I can see these poems used as text for a children's book, and I am in the process of looking for a place to submit them. Any comments or suggestions are warmly welcomed!

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Ode to Kant's oughtness

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For Rlvs, whose challenge to write something about animals I did not see until the contest was over. Inspired by Flowing Pencil who telescoped two poems into one (separated here like yolks from egg whites) and believes haiku should create a mood, an atmosphere, not try to tell a story. In your feedback, if any, please say why you think the haiku pattern works or does not work in English.

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For lifes' sake we must exhume our deaths

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This poem might be about a tree, but somehow I think not... Any comments are welcome. Thanks.

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Simple very quick piece of writing without thought but sudden flow of words from somewhere within. Any and all comments welcome. Feeling evoked???

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nature is silent but speaks volumes. Take the time to listen with your eyes.

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All feedback welcome!!!

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As usual, suggestions welcome.

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I don't remember writing this, but rather like it.

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My first attempt at haiku. All reviews welcome.

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An older poem

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This all transpired more than a year ago. This past fall I saw the same deer with a pure white patch of hide where her open wound had healed completely over. Comments welcome.

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Haiku nature solitary figure night seventeen syllables total

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Inspired just this momment, thanks sara! Any and all feedback would be a great help

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