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We need to feed ourselves, Maybe we should dine on Oil Exects and their families and friends, and their pets? It's The American Way. Lets eat, why not?

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I am always playing with the werewolf theme. This is one of my earlier attempts and I'd love to re-write it and find a home in a mag somewhere. This is a story of a woman who doesn't what is real and what isn't. Suggestions for the re-write welcome. I would love to make it tighter and smoother.

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When everyone around her starts dying and a mysterious young detective working the case, Siera struggles to understand the unexplainable with her time quickly running out..... I'd greatly appreciate any feedback people can give me, i've never written a novel before. I also tend to post the chapters before much editing, so I know they need to be (mainly because i'm crap at grammar and english rules, so i'm learning from your comments as i go!!). I'd really like any comments on the flow of the chapter, content, anything that stands out etc....All feedback is welcome!!

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I am happy overall with this story except for two small things. The opening is problematic I think and that for some reason it doesn't appeal to publishers. If you have an idea why, I'd love to hear it.

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Guardian angel? Maybe. Sometimes you never know who --- or what --- is watching out for you...

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My story is a fictional account of the First Black serial killer in the US. It takes place in the 1920's and is told from the twisted point of view of our central character. For that era he would have been considered "evil" nowdays we would label him a sociopath and study his mind. I am looking for feedback on everything, this is my first attempt at a project like this and any and all feedback is welcome. I did use several poems from Langston Hughes, Claude McKaye, and a quote from Marcus Garvey to help capture the mood and atmosphere of the time. I also wrote several poems under the names of Hiawatha Wiggins in honor of one of my kids favorite cartoon characters Chief Wiggins from The Simpsons, and i also used the name "Jumpin" Joe Benton for a little variety. This is all new to me so i hope i can live up to your standards. Thank you.

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A family fleeing from personal tragedy moves to a small, planned community in Ohio to start over. While the recovering alcoholic father makes half-hearted attempts to reconnect with his estranged 14-year old daughter his wife takes a job in town with the real estate corporation that built the idyllic town where they now live. Soon enough the veil is pulled back and they discover the town is populated by people somehow transformed into raging killers who are all savagely murdering each other in secret. The family has to bond together to solve the mystery or they won't make it out alive.

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A Night home on the buss with Mr. George and small people.

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A nightmare I had as a child, recurring every night for about six weeks....rrreeeaaallllyyyy weird. I've not edited it yet so very rough but here it is!

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The morphing of Intell Inside and Jason. Loretta screams!

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Electronic love, Lost love found again, Seeing is some times not beliving.

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Ellen learns her doctor is the reason she's in the hospital.

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A group of boys find what they think is buried treasure using a home-made map and a made-up "Pirate's Spell". What starts out as a fun adventure between four friends soon turns into a struggle for their lives with an ancient evil. An evil that should have never been found, let alone unearthed. This will probably become my strongest start entry so any and all help is welcome. Thanks for reading and enjoy.

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Death, Demise, Envy, Jealousy

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a warrior princess part wolf seduces men then eats their remains.

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What do you get for a Mother who has everything?

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I've decided to polish up all of my short stories so I can start sending out. I posted this a long time ago, but decided to post fresh since I've reworked it. I'm looking for very critical eyes. I got an almost from a magazine on this before I reworked it. Have at it. Get as nitpicky as you'd like.

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A spooky ride with a saintly fellow named Chuck. Another attempt at a good story of less than 5K words for contest. Is it "fleshed out" enough? There are still about a thousand words I can add, what does it need more of?

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It's been called the sickest story I've ever written. You be the judge. =)

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Maple Townsend thought her simple life as a police dispatcher in her hometown was perfect, but little did she know the summer would change her life forever. A stalker is taunting her with threatening letters, bloody messages, and strange phone calls, which lead to the disappearance of her niece and nephew. Maple now realizes she is a ticking time bomb,and everyone who knows her will be in danger soon if she doesn't play by the rules. Comments, suggestions, feedback always welcomed. Thanks. L.A. Thunder

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Her was army beaten and forced to plunge from the sheer cliffs to their deaths. A thousand years later, they have arisen in a new world determined to conquer and enslave it. They are led by their eternal leader, a woman draped in red - Monarch. The small, suburban town of Wellow Falls becomes the breeding ground for this alien evil. Preston Dregor, the town bully must see if he can redeem himself for his past sins, summon the courage to rescue the girl he has grown to love, and stop Monarch.

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See Part One.

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Teller had spent many years as a security guard, but his new job at a high-end luxury hotel was more than just being a security guard. He was now a Loss Prevention Officer. Maybe he should have just left well enough alone. Sometimes ambition can be a bad thing.

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I've always wanted to do a story in which somebody says, 'Merry f****** Christmas.' Well...This is it. It's part of a bundle of short stories entitled 'What Happened Here,' and I've had serious bite from a publisher after submitting two tales. Several of them are still available here for your reading pleasure. Your comments are highly appreciated. Merry, ah...Christmas :o)

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With his parents recently dead from a car accident, Shaw has become lost in life. Unsure of where to go he finds solace in the letters from his Aunt. An Aunt he has never met and before it's all over, an Aunt he'll wish he had never met. He goes to live with her in a small village located in the back woods of Florida, and it turns out that this particular village is run by a cult, of which his aunt is a member of, and the cult is run by a particularly evil man by the name of Pastor Brown. Any comments at all would be much appreciated as this is my first crack at a novel. Thank you.

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Is John really who he thinks he is? What do YOU think? I always reciprocate.

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Vanessa Capalleri was struck by lightening at the age of twenty-one, and her life suddenly changed. Now, at thirty, she’s happily married, has the perfect relationship with her husband Brian, two beautiful daughters, and a flawless life. Until, she begins seeing visions of the murder victims, At first, she believes she’s delusional, and doesn’t understand what the visions mean, until one day, her life changes forever. After hearing about the brutal murder of a ten year old child on the news, Vanessa tries to convince her husband, she saw the missing girls body in the back of a van, behind the dance studio her girls attend. Now, he thinks something is seriously wrong with his wife because the night she claimed to have seen the girl’s body, Brian had been with her,but he saw nothing. Comments, and feedback are welcomed and always appreciated. Thanks, L.A.Thunder

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