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Torin Ever-blade knew from a young age that adversities and hardships faced in life did not always surmount to endings like those of fairy tales; when war invades the lives of good citizens how riotous a man is does nought to stem the blood flow from a raucous wound, treacherous acts are often rewarded not chastened and when a boy finds himself alone in the world and forced to a life of thievery and disrepute just to survive, the spark of good kept in the heart does not always endure. Torin knew this because this was his battle, this was his plight and as he ventures into the great unknown and matures into a young man the world he thought he knew turns out to be nothing at all how he imagined. Lords and Kings vie for power, deals made in the dark manifest themselves into yokes of burden on the innocent and the ever watchful Arch-mage Krisakth Lostantis who's motives remain unclear still has his role to play. This is the world of Karaztor, long ago reigned the mighty empire of Tarn, its ruins now lie scattered across broken continents, like shards of a once mighty weapon. The new kingdoms which occupy but a third of the lands have just declared peace but how long will this peace last. For the brave there are fortunes to be found plundering the ancient empire ruins, parties of adventures forge their way across the world to denizens not visited in centuries, some return, others do not, for such treasures are loftily guarded by dangerous creatures, some hideous, some beautiful and some unimaginable.

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THIS IS AN URBAN FANTASY: Emma Willis is 10 years old, and she has a secret. She has not only inherited her grandmother's power of sight, Granny Dottie called a curse, she can accomplish much more. When a murderer is loose in Newark, a maniac with many faces and a thirst for killing children, she begins to understand why her Granny called her sight a curse. She will need all her powers to catch a killer and help the people in her life. Only, the madman knows who she is...

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Tormalia

When the Thrillseekers reunited, little did they know the treasure they sought would be the first part of the path to the Elemental Stone, one half of the greatest power in all the world.

They set out on their journey with the fabled Stonechaser, the sorceress Len-Ahl, in order to stop the ambitions of Queen Qabala, holder of the Elemental Stone's opposite. She has allied with a greater power to bring the evil entity named Eversor into the world, and hinders the Thrillseekers' quest by bringing back ancient horrors from a mysterious beyond.

The Thrillseekers must contend with internal struggles as new faces join the journey, as well as Nerris and Len-Ahl's budding relationship. Can they all coexist as the fight for the fate of the world rapidly draws near?

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Inside jacket cover: A dark sorceress plies immutable blood manipulations upon twin male embroyos. Bred with the might and magic of an ancient deity, these boys are formed to conquer a universe. At five years, they are kidnapped and hidden far from the cruel schemes of the black goddess. As teenagers, Rendamone and Cenegul Redate, live quietly amongst the simple inhapbitants of the planet Carte. But when the foul science raging in their blood erupts, Rendamone manifests a murderous lust for violence while his twin smolders with magic untold. Rendamone devastates everyone he loves, but when faced with Carte's certain doom, he defends his homeland and stands against the planet's deadliest threat . . . his brother. Book Blurb: Bred to destroy, twin boys are hidden from a malevolent goddess. But when the pair come of age, fate sets brother against brother.

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This story picks up the perspective of the students in Kha's school after he was mortally cursed in the Earthwound 'incident'. All my books revolve around the same story. All of them contain clues about what happened to injure Kha and will help lead the characters to the discovery of truth. I'm looking for character work, advice on the plot and ways to trim the story into something manageable. I have an issue with head-hopping. Catch any flip of perspective that you can for me. I also tend towards disorganization in my paragraphs/ my thought flit around until I come to a conclusion. If you see anything that could be presented better, I would love to hear it. I love any and all critique. Hit me with your best nit!

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New readers - I am currently in the process of reworking the 1st half of this one. In a month or so I'll post new versions of each chapter & I'd love input at that point!Susan, Seabrass & Rebecca - I'm going to keep moving forward - thanks for sticking with me! PLEASE NOTE: I do not follow POV rules in my fantasy series. If you are confused about whose head you're in, let me know, otherwise I am aware of the standard rules and have chosen to ignore them.

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Thirteen-year-old Christopher John Monroe is a bit of a slacker. He prefers video games to homework, soccer to school, playing with his dog Sam to helping around the house. Pretty much a typical, well-adjusted 21st Century kid. All but for one thing. . . . He happens to be the Antichrist. Sorry. Did I say "the" Antichrist? I meant "an" Antichrist. You didn't know there were more than one? Actually, there are three candidates for the job, all thirteen-year-old kids like Chris. The idea is to find the lost Seventh Seal. Whoever finds it first gets the gig. Then, of course, there's the little detail of opening the Seal . . . and starting Armageddon. Chris doesn't want to do that. But the other little Devils aren't so nice. The question is: Can Christopher John overcome his inner slacker, find the Seal before the other kids and save the world? You better hope so. Otherwise, the forecast is for some very hot weather.

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Betrayed by her own prodigy, Eolyn, High Maga and Queen of Moisehén, is imprisoned for treason. While power-hungry nobles dismantle her life’s work and honor, the desperate queen forges a risky alliance with the cunning and ruthless Mage Corey. Across the Furma River, Taesara of Roenfyn is drawn out of seclusion and into an ever-more vicious game of intrigue and war. Subject to the whims of a scheming uncle and the ambitions of the mysterious wizards of Galia, she struggles to assert control over her own fate. Dark forces released inside the heart of Moisehén bring a kingdom to its knees and set these two formidable women on a path toward violent confrontation. At stake: the lives of their children, the future of their magic, and the forging of a new dynasty.

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Monroy has been incarcerated in an asylum since he was eight because he refused to change his story...now at sixteeen he escapes and begins an Epic journey to find his sister... Any thoughts on flow, appropriate groups that should be targeted, and genre are truly appreciated.

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A history narrated by two people. What do you guys think?

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Alaidriel is woken by a nightmare, but what is really happening is so much worse. I have literally been working on this story since I was twelve (10 years). However, it doesn't really resemble the story it was since my writing has matured over the years. I would love to know if this story draws you in. Any feedback in general would be great. Keep in mind that it is a rough draft and I'm aware it needs editing. Thanks!

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Succubus Tear is a love story.
A love story that is "against all odds" as it were.
I added elements that are outside what The Bible mentions to give it that flavor of "what if"

A great deal of my Faith went into this story.

In this story we follow Cain, an anti-Christian Athiest as he meets and is Bonded to a Succubus.

With the simplistic beauty of her very existance; she changes Cain, and his world view forever. She reveals his own life through a new lens, and more.

Feel free to grammer review.
But I what I seek, is to know how *strong* or *weak* is my story telling.

I think it matters more....

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ATTENTION: I am NOT trying to make a political statement with this story. I am NOT trying to make a spiritual statement with this story. I am NOT condoning or condemning suicide. I’m just trying to tell a story. Ok. Here is a huge experiment for me. I’ve never written anything but memoirs in first person, so I’m seeing how it feels. So far it feels clunky and restrained, like half the story can’t get out and I’m only on chapter one. This is a little tale that has been begging to get attention for a few months so I thought I’d give it some time. I’m writing on the wing here. Usually, I make an outline so this should be fun. Thanks! Bimmy

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Aidah and Tavish, twins and troublemakers extraordinaire, may have bitten off more than they can swallow when strange things begin to happen around them. They already know part of the problem--Tavish is a firestarter. But Aidah has shown no Talent as of yet, though there has been hope since she was born that she might carry the rare Talent of Spirit Magic. Far away in the city of Landaran lives their Grandess Korva, Protector of the Doane the greatest Spirit Mage of the land. In the mountain village, Aidah and Tavish's lives have never been touched by the war that has raged between the Doane and the Innis Empire for over two hundred years. That's about to change. Note: This is my latest project--I'm working on the last few chapters now, but thought I'd get moving on having others look at the earlier chapters. This will be the first book of a five book series. I caution readers that there are some darker issues tackled in this book, including rape and child abuse. All types of criticism are welcome--this has not gone through a lot of editing yet. Thanks!

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