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"This is a story of a boy, who had no chance, and a girl, who was born with a silver spoon in her mouth. This is a story of ordinary lives torn apart and reassembled into something beautiful. This is a story of amazing success against all the odds. Be careful, if you fall in love, this may happen to you too." Authors note: This is not a mainstream "erotica" story, rather a story of relationships with erotic elements. In the first part there are no sex scenes, just the build-up of characters and the story environment. The feedback that I am mostly interested in is whether the story keeps attention well; is it easy to read, is it engaging? Or, on the contrary, is there something in that story that you find boring, difficult to read, annoying or repulsive? Thanks in advance for comments and critique. I guess, I should write at the beginning an excuse for language and also ask reviewers to disregard the grammar mistakes, although I know, they are annoying. The original text is written in Lithuanian and I am translating it into English, which is a foreign language to me. There is very little I can do about writing in better English (although, I am pretty sure there is plenty I can do about writing better literature). If I would ever have to publish it in English, it would have to be translated once again by a professional translator. For the moment, I would just like to see if the story itself is appealing to the English-reading audience.

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Basically a paranormal erotic short story. I think the title pretty much sums it up. Any and all feedback is welcome! This is a very rough first draft so critic away!

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I'm looking for honest feedback on my writing style, how the story made you feel, what you might do differently,what you like about the story; and any other comments you feel like sharing.

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My first attempt at a feminine point of view, I would like comments on that as well as the usual, what does it feel like to be a woman? There is not a lot of physical descriptions here though I may add some later, I was trying to imagine how it would feel, emotionally and physically, to be a woman in the twisted environment I created.

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A story of manners: A father helps his daughter with her flatware choices. This is the same story I posted as a chapter of a memoir novel. I am posting it again as a short story because it is both short and I hope a story. I also posted it again to give those who reviewed the previous posting a chance to get a twofer. Copy and paste your previous review if you can't stomach reading it again. I did edit it slightly to make it better. If you are reading it and you find how I edited, I'll give you five stars the next time I review one of your stories.

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A night at the drive in theater, turns to a night in the woods. I had this dream and it became a story.

As of Saturday, August 05 2012. I have Renamed this book.I have also written chapters 6-10, but have not decided to release them to you, or if I should hold off for just a little longer.

I know my grammar is not the best.I will soon have an editor revise all my work, as soon as I finish chapters 10-30.

Keep in touch I may release more of this story.Just to keep my readers happy.Tell me how you feel about this title, and of course keep helping me revise this adventurous story. Thank you readers I'll definitely acknowledge you all in the final product!

As of Friday, August 10th. I am going to release a new version of Ch.1. The new release has a lot of the same aspects. A lot of the same "parts", yet I am just doing what all you readers love most. I have added even more detail so....stay tuned to the new release of my chapter!

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A more authentic student perspective on the whole professor/student sexual fantasy.

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*The asterisk is added because a similar title exists. Mysterious and strange - that altered space/time we occupy between ordinary consciousness and sleep. Review comments welcomed.

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here in the uk we have a kinky undies and sex toy store that is also renowned for home parties...yes i hosted one recently...a good girlie night of wine, nibbles and giggles as we passed around the latest lingerie and varied collection of vibrant vibrators...beats watching tv any day i must say!

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I am experiencing many changes since Max died...sadness, heartbreak, loneliness I expected. But desire? I never once considered the vast separation imposed on the earthbound by the companion who has flown...I did not know there would be a struggle imposed by the separation of spirit from flesh...I feel my human-ness more than ever...

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a colection of short stories revolving around an online afair between a husband and wife and a lonely coledge student

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just finished this first draft, im sure its rough, but if people liek it i will take the time to polish it

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My first attempt at erotic fiction, loosely based on an aactual encounter

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Hopefully you will still be able to leave feedback! Warning as this is explicit ... Z rated! Heat and more heat! Hold an ice cube in one hand and be ready to use it!

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After a night on the town, Tom and Gerry are full as boots. Gerry puts Tom to bed in his apartment and goes to Tom's apartment to sleep off the rest of the night in peace. In fact, the real charm of the night is only now about to begin. Please let me have any honest comment you like. If it appealed to your worst sexual fantasies, please tell me. If it left you as cold as an expedition might feel in Antarctica, please tell me that too. If you were just amused, that might be nice to know. Many thanks for whatever you may say.

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Okay - on to the next experiment! I haven't deliberately written a poem to conform to a shape before. This one would be much more effective if the letters inside the lip shape were red instead of black (in my opinion). Let me know what you think.

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Two young lovers learn the ropes. Honest and frank feedback of any kind will be most welcome.

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This is just some erotic writing I did for my wife's pleasure and would like some feedback before I submit some other erotica I have written.

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This is a new piece that is short and I hope sweet for erotica. I believe it could use some more character development but wanted to keep things short to get back into the game after a few months away from writing.

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Our "hero" is in hospital when his girl comes to visit him. From the healthy turmoil she creates, he is delivered by another who skilfully treats the existing incandescence and creates another combustion of her own.

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Callista is a college student that returns home and rekindles an old love. Logan has been waiting for Callista for a very long time. Now he is unwilling to wait longer for Callista to make a commitment. Ch.1 is a bit tame, the rest gets a steamy.

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The narrator rings a beautiful young woman of his acquaintance and they arrange to spend a weekend together at a romantic spot on the south coast of New South Wales. The question is: will it prove to be a time for them to admire the ocean, the beach and the magnificent forested landscapes or will it turn out to be a "dirty weekend?"

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The exquisitely beautiful Angelica (Angie) is voyaging by great ocean-liner to rejoin her husband Jeremy (Jemmy) after five months' separation.

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A tropical vacation is suppose to be warm. Sometimes it can also be hot.

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Just tossing this out to see if there is enough interest for me to spend time developing the story. Do you care about any of the characters? Do you want more?

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I have written an erotic piece about four college friends now in two couples getting together for a weekend away. How does the story flow and does it have any literary value?

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A fun little piece to see if I could write something that is nothing but dialog, and still have it be interesting. Let me know if you like it.

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This is a story about a couple away from the kids and alone in the big city for the first time in almost twenty years. it is a tale of love, sex, and joy.

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This is an intimate tale of two lovers that have been together for twenty years and still have some magic left.

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