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Hopefully you will still be able to leave feedback! Warning as this is explicit ... Z rated! Heat and more heat! Hold an ice cube in one hand and be ready to use it!

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After a night on the town, Tom and Gerry are full as boots. Gerry puts Tom to bed in his apartment and goes to Tom's apartment to sleep off the rest of the night in peace. In fact, the real charm of the night is only now about to begin. Please let me have any honest comment you like. If it appealed to your worst sexual fantasies, please tell me. If it left you as cold as an expedition might feel in Antarctica, please tell me that too. If you were just amused, that might be nice to know. Many thanks for whatever you may say.

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This is my first attempt at erotica writing. Not an area I am use to writing in but figured I would step out of my comfort zone.

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Okay - on to the next experiment! I haven't deliberately written a poem to conform to a shape before. This one would be much more effective if the letters inside the lip shape were red instead of black (in my opinion). Let me know what you think.

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I've never tried erotica. Honest critiques welcomed. My assignment to myself consisted of the following: -Erotica -Avoid the use of 'sex' words to describe actual body parts (which I HATE to read in sex scenes. Allude...) -Be in the 'head' of one character only, completely out of the head of the other. Let me know if you think it works or not! ;)

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Two young lovers learn the ropes. Honest and frank feedback of any kind will be most welcome.

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This is just some erotic writing I did for my wife's pleasure and would like some feedback before I submit some other erotica I have written.

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This is a new piece that is short and I hope sweet for erotica. I believe it could use some more character development but wanted to keep things short to get back into the game after a few months away from writing.

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Our "hero" is in hospital when his girl comes to visit him. From the healthy turmoil she creates, he is delivered by another who skilfully treats the existing incandescence and creates another combustion of her own.

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A woman gives her lover some TLC after he injures his back. She surprises him with her erotic ways of nursing him back to health.

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The narrator rings a beautiful young woman of his acquaintance and they arrange to spend a weekend together at a romantic spot on the south coast of New South Wales. The question is: will it prove to be a time for them to admire the ocean, the beach and the magnificent forested landscapes or will it turn out to be a "dirty weekend?"

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Strangers meet in a dark movie theatre and indulge in an evening of passion. Feedback with suggestions on improving my writing is desired.

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The exquisitely beautiful Angelica (Angie) is voyaging by great ocean-liner to rejoin her husband Jeremy (Jemmy) after five months' separation.

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A short erotica story about a girl's first threesome. Based on the true life tale of one of my male friends (Clive)

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A tropical vacation is suppose to be warm. Sometimes it can also be hot.

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Would you have sex in a steamroom with a guy or girl you had your eye on from the gym? Would the thought of getting caught entice you sexual spontaniety? Has anyone tried this? Once more, my saucy mind has gone overboard and created a fantasy of mine. I think the heat would be painful though, especially in those circumstances!

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Just tossing this out to see if there is enough interest for me to spend time developing the story. Do you care about any of the characters? Do you want more?

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This is meant to be scary. What do you think?

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Well, a reviewer mentioned that a sequel could be delivered from The Dominatrix, so I've tried to deliver one. Not sure about the middle or the ending, so please give me some honest feedback and state if it works? Any other ideas would be a bonus. Thanks. This story has been rewritten.

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A horny explicit piece of erotica that I have rewritten. Thanks for all your great comments so far, I greatly appreciate them.

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Rewritten story. I'm afraid they wouldn't let me add the rest of the story (its 6824 words), but any feedback is appreciated.

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I've always wondered what it would be like to have sex in the rain, and this story describes what I feel it would be like. I have an over eager main character Ellen, who is falling in love with her boyfriend, but she never does quite get to tell him true feelings, although if you read toward the end, he says something that makes her think twice, and gives her confidence. Enjoy

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I'm a big fan of tattoos and have four myself. Currently getting a sleeve done on my right arm. When I was having my third tattoo on my upper spine I don't know, I felt strangely aroused so incorporated it into a story. Shame I didn't get a fuck later, but oh well, that's why I write erotica.

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Please state if my stories titillate you? Would you purchase my work?

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My two characters have had a hard week at work and this is how they have decided to handle it.

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Again, this is an extremely explicit piece. Any feedback as to whether is too graphic, or if it's okay for the Erotica genre would be much appreciated. I enjoy writing this kind of piece and have done so for many years, but am still a little hesitant to post them, lol. Thank you!

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This is an extremely explicit piece, and I hope that I'm not over the top on my erotica writing. This is a new genre for me and I'm simply not sure how graphic I should or shouldn't be... I appreciate whatever feedback - good or bad - that anyone would like to offer.

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I have written an erotic piece about four college friends now in two couples getting together for a weekend away. How does the story flow and does it have any literary value?

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A fun little piece to see if I could write something that is nothing but dialog, and still have it be interesting. Let me know if you like it.

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This is a story about a couple away from the kids and alone in the big city for the first time in almost twenty years. it is a tale of love, sex, and joy.

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This is an intimate tale of two lovers that have been together for twenty years and still have some magic left.

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two anonymous nameless people meet for clandescent encounter looking for general feedback

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