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A look back at life in the 1960s as a young man comes of age. The memoir includes reflections on himself, people he knew and the events of that time. I would be looking for input about the writing style, wording and organization of each chapter. Also, did the reader enjoy reading the chapter and want to read more?

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Poor schmuck.

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On letting go...

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A poem.

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Everyone has a moment where they look back and realize that they have lost their innocence.

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This article had been commissioned for a women's magazine here in Australia. The word count HAS to be 800 words which doesn't leave a lot of room to move! Some advice would be appreciated :) IT has to be sent in by the 30th November, Australian time.

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Second submission of this story, with edits based on comments received. Please pick all the nits you can. I wrote this specifically for the Haunted House competition, my first attempt at writing to a theme instead of just writing what comes out. It's more suspense than horror, but I couldn't find suspense on the list. 2630 words

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A man whose dreams were never fulfilled

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To whom does The People's Champion belong? The people or himself? That's the question foundling(orphan) Jakund Frey'lnd, a gifted young swordsman and war hero dubbed "Kid Blade," struggles with as he battles the ferocious Gothari and learns that his fame as warrior makes him a target for those looking to make a name for themself as well as an unwilling player in the games of the powerful. This is a Young Adult Fantasy, filled with humor and action, designed to appeal to all ages.

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A poem.

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Little moments like movie frames.

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A poem.

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Something I think about maybe once a year that happened a long time ago but still is on my mind.

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A poem.

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My evening on the boardwalk.

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Summer Love

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The random thoughts that keep you awake.

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