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 | Ode To The Overlooked Rewrite/Republished | flowing pencil | Short Story | Humor | 3 | 0.30 | Nov 21, 2010 |
Summary:This is an old piece and I post it only to let many know that Flo is okay! Things have been rather dark and sad lately BUT... my humor is alive and well. I worked on this piece as was embarrassed by the horrendous amount of errors.
Are there still errors! Of course! This is me folks! Still a student.
No need to leave reviews as many have already read it. I am reposting it for those who need to laugh or at least I hope they laugh or nod in recognition.
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| When Chimes Ring | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 13 | 0.34 | Dec 14, 2009 |
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Reflections of a summer day when first I heard the "chimes." Just putting an experience to words so simple yet to me a serenade.
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| Slow Burning Candle | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 13 | 0.34 | Oct 12, 2009 |
Summary:Poem about life also the use of allegories in expression in poetry or any writing.
Hope is to get readers who hesitate reviewing poetry to take a leap in faith as there is no wrong way to review if you say how a work 'feels' 'provokes' or if it doesn't. Still good feedback and can help enrich one's own writing.
Poetry is not my favorite genre. I don't even own a book of poetry except for my mothers. Only poetry I read in on this site. I write it as do not feel confident in other genres. I too am learning to try though. To stretch oneself is to grow and stay flexible.
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| The news came suddenly | po | Poetry | Poetry | 10 | 1.43 | Sep 17, 2009 |
Summary:my first cousin died recently of a drug overdose. This poem is how I dealt with the grief.
I am interested in how the style is perceived as this is a comfortable writing style for me.
This is the first time I have posted work on this forum and I am grateful for the reviews. I am grateful for the editing comments by kiwi & ulli as I have incorporated them into my piece. My first time listening to constructive editing advice. There maybe hope for me yet. To you other kind people, thanks for your comments. I will be sharing this poem at a family reunion today. Hopefully it will bring perspective & healing...
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