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Have you ever wondered what small town people are really like? In this unique Florida population of 2000, you'll meet off-the-chain women who deal with husband issues, crazy neighbors, addicted boyfriends, cash shortages, and church scams. I mingle the genres of mystery, romance and humor. Enjoy this redneck roller coaster ride!

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A one-sided battle of the sexes. A 6K word story posted in two parts due to posting length limitations, but best read continuously. Interested as always in character development, pace, general reaction. Does it hold your interest. Many thanks.

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A one-sided battle of the sexes. Input please on character, pace, general reaction. Thanks much.

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INVOLUNTARY REVENGE is a contemporary tale of corporate angst, pitting Libby, a discontented insurance rep in her late-twenties, against a relentless boss-from-hell and an assortment of conniving, uncooperative and sometimes creepy coworkers. She is tortured by frequent dreams of killing her boss---in every way imaginable. She has no current boyfriend (working on it) and her support group consists of a “shopanista” best friend, a diet-and-dessert-obsessed gay friend, a laid-back therapist and a difficult, widowed dad. The story, which takes place over a tumultuous four months, shifts from reality to dream, often unexpectedly. As the infuriating encounters with her boss and the unsettling nightmares increase, Libby finds herself looking at handguns. Will the pressure cause her to cross over that shadowy bridge between the subconscious and the conscious world? The answer to that question is both startling and ironic. I rewrote the entire novel since submitting the first three chapters last year. Your comments are appreciated. Good luck to all of us! IMAwriter

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Annie Buntin is a successful mystery writer, but her real life keeps interferring with her writing. The novel starts out with humor, but as is true with any person's life, bad things also come into play. Annie balances the bad with the funny to keep her sanity. Feedback: Idea of the story, characters, plot and what ever else you would like to offer. Also, comments on the title would be greatly appreciated.

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Kevyn Morgan just found out her father wasn’t dead for the past thirty years like she’d thought, but in the Caribbean searching for sunken treasure. The question now is was he running from responsibility or something else? Join Kevyn aboard Wander as she sails her father’s thirty-two foot boat to the islands in search of a man she’s never known and one she might not want to get to know.

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The chase and executing of Bin Laden.

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After her grandmother, Jenessa, flees her home in terror, Anna takes over as the caretaker of the property. Only 18 years old, and having just left an abusive home, Anna soon finds that the troubles she'd experienced up to now were nothing compared to what waits for her at The House on Miller Street. Will Anna survive her encounters with the malevolent being? Or will she, too, flee in abject terror?

Feedback: I'm looking for comments on continuity, flow and character development.

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To every woman. In every city. In every country. On every continent. From Wales to Wall Street. From New York to New England, Alabama to Australia. To women who have crossed the lines to shape an uncertain world. To Maya Angelou, Eleanor Roosevelt, Fannie Lou, Lady Bird Johnson, Rosa Parks, Princess Diana and too many women to mention, women who are up and women who are down. This baffled world can Rise no higher than you are uplifted. We have only run the first lap in the long marathon of hope and we brace ourselves for the second lap. I hope this poem increases your hope and courage.

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For thirty years Richard Singer, a therapist, bears the secret of how his sister died; until his marriage to the amorous Sally Rosten leaves him no choice but a full confession. Since this is a first chapter, I want to know if I've captured your attention and if you want to read more. If not, why not?

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This is the monologue of a comedian who is doing his first performance on stage about meeting a girl on Match.com. I would like ideas on how to make it more humorous, and whether some of the "valley girl" language has to be removed to make it sound more like a male comedian. Also, let me know if it's R or PG.

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Vicarious is chick-lit on steroids married to guy-spy thriller on Midol. The result is PMS meets AK47 where barbs fly faster than bullets.

Avery Bonelli was an investigative journalist with Pulitzer ambitions until Logan Nash destroyed her credibility and made her Chiquita non grata in the journalism world. Now he's back with a bullet in his shoulder and a scoop that can put her back in the big leagues. All she has to do is stay alive.

When an international terrorist escapes justice on a technicality, the country wants blood. Avery just wants the exclusive … and Logan has it. He also has ulterior motives, a familiar hazard when fraternizing with the Y chromosome. But having just broken off an engagement, Avery has no interest in Logan’s pecs … or his 21st digit.

But you can’t go cold-turkey on men. Not when Ben & Jerry are calling your name from the frozen foods aisle and Logan's the one holding the scoop.

Avery is about to uncover the truth behind the terrorist trial, which threatens a political conspiracy that permeates every branch of government, from the FBI to the White House. Assassins are gunning for her and she doesn’t know why. The only guns she carries are a pair of 34Bs in a Victoria’s Secret holster. She’s forced to get Logan’s help. They break into a maximum-security stronghold, steal top-secret research, and run for their lives. Caught between a terrorist and a military commando, Avery will have to trust her life to the man who just might want her dead.

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In my travels, I've noticed something that should be addressed. I've held it in way too long. It's time someone wrote something about the contortion contraptions that women have to use, called Public Restrooms. Here's my rant, sisters. See if you don't agree!

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Was originally posted as a tough drabble but didn't like the way it ended so shortened it. A picture of what was and is becoming again.. poverty-- broken dreams. Any and all feedback...

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a story that I plan to do as a screenplay next. Can you visualize this as a movie? On Stage? In a book? Your comments mean a lot to me, always have.

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A young woman, on her own for the first time, finds wisdom and humor from the other waitresses at the Red Top Diner. Feedback: All comments are welcome. I'm not sure I captured this story in the allotted words. Maybe it needs to be longer. Your thoughts?

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The humorous story of an attractive forty-something woman, labeled by some in society as a "cougar," trying to succeed as the public relations manager to a sex-crazed Mayor in the world of Philadelphia's city politics. The wild antics of her dates, co-workers, and especially the mayor, add up as she tries to keep the mayor out of trouble and successfully land her dream job as a White House public relations manager. Things really get out of control when a religious foreign diplomat comes to town, accompanied by his beautiful twenty-two year old "party down" daughter.

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A reflection made last year. Now I'm six and thirty. Does that mak things better or worse?

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Divorce from a man's perspective perhaps?

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How affected is our view of ourselves-- our intelligence, beauty, self worth-- when pitted against someone who is supposed to be the embodiment of the "gold standard?" The evil is twofold: a loathing and envy of another, coupledd with budding self-loathing.

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For some unknown reason, women feel they must drop hints as to the gifts they would like to receive from men. The poem is a silly take on how this ritual does NOT work!

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Any and all feedback is appreciate. I'm not a poet, but I am trying to explore other genres in order to improve my writing generally. This is part of an exercise I am putting myself through where I write as the words come to me and give them life on paper without judgments or edits.

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This is the first draft of The Erstwhile Hearts Guild Chapter 3. This story is coming to me sort of haphazardly,(hence no Chapter 2 yet) but I take it with me everywhere. Any feedback is helpful. Thank you in advance

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This is a my version of the setting at a recent business dinner.

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A woman about to commit a savage act of war in the name of religion....a dark comparison to the seamingly routine dressing of a woman.

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