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 | Don't Say Yes | emarie | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 8 | 0.47 | Dec 7, 2010 |
Summary:Finally realinzing her mistake, she must run to the church and stop the wedding before it's too late.Chapters: |
| The Bum Magnet II - Got a Right to Be Wrong | Karla B. | Novel | Commercial Fiction | 3 | n/a | Nov 9, 2010 |
Summary:Charisse finally has it “all�?: an adoring fiancé, a great job, a dream car, and a McMansion. Her former bum magnet status has also left her with a heaping entrée of fear of commitment served with a large side of wedding jitters. Even worse, her family is pushing her to reconcile with her "sperm donor," an estranged father with whom she’s never had more than a casual relationship, and invite him to the wedding. Her jitters are sent into hyper drive when she discovers Prince Charming has some major chinks in his armor and she’s not sure if she can go through with the wedding. Unfortunately, time to thaw her frozen feet and decide if Mr. Right Now is Mr. Right Forever isn’t on the schedule, as a series of unfortunate events sends a slew of drama-filled family and friends—including a mother on the run from the police, a jilted best friend, and a father diagnosed with cancer who she’d vowed to alienate—to be couped up with her at Chez Charisse for the two weeks before the ceremony that might not happen. Can Charisse survive the two weeks with her relationship, family, and sanity intact? ***This is a slightly less rough first draft. Shorter chapters with new information added, so you may want to start reading from Chapter 1. Still needs work but does the story line work? Are the chapter hooks effective? How is the dialogue? Does the shift in POV work? If you had a problem with anything, please let me know. All feedback welcome.Chapters: |
| Funeral | wisealma | Poetry | Romance | 3 | 0.22 | Jun 8, 2010 |
Summary:Any and allChapters: |
| The Royal Wedding | maryapryl | Short Story | Fantasy | 5 | 1.18 | Aug 28, 2009 |
Summary: Any feedback, good and bad is appreciated.
That said....
It started with a honey bear and a pizzaChapters: |
| CHAUCEY | Justi Moody | Novel | Historical Fiction | 9 | n/a | Jan 20, 2008 |
Summary:This is my first attempt at a novel and I am certainly open to any criticism. The novel begins in January 1924 a little less than 60 years after the Civil war and five years before the Great Depression. The main character is getting married today. She describes her home, her life to this date in some of her mannerisms and dialog because she is expecting to take on a totally new life after the wedding vows. She breaks Southern Tradition is sort of a feminist. There is an element of super natural in each chapter. It is so subtle until it may not be apparent until much later in the book. Chapters: |
