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 | SHADOW IN FLIGHT | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 10 | 0.23 | Sep 19, 2011 |
Summary:Okay, being very honest regarding this piece. Was going to only post the first verse as it is the one that simply came to me and I had to run and grab a pen and throw it down.
Thinking how hard it is for reviewers to simply review one short verse, I created the next two verses. Do they take away from the strength and honest of the first verse? Do the second and third come out too cliche or forced. They weren't forced at all, but they didn't just flow from that magic place we all know.
Any feedback on this is appreciated. Chapters: |
| ANNA'S STORY | flowing pencil | Short Story | Literary Fiction | 12 | 0.74 | Sep 18, 2011 |
Summary:Rough draft of serious entry for contest. Posting it as will force me to work on it and I don't have to chance of losing it again.
Any and all feedback is always welcomed. Chapters: |
| A Day In Time | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 8 | 0.12 | Mar 1, 2011 |
Summary:Yes... there will be more but too much on my mind to follow up right now.
Although, perhaps it says it all? Today is truly all we have and perhaps not even that long. Live in moment more?
This is one of those little pieces that one simply grabs a pencil and throws down before the words escape. Especially an old mind like mine!
I had forgot it was even here as had no title even. Stumbled across it this morning so here it is.
Very brief so sorry about the fifty word limit!!! haaaaaChapters: |
| Water Rising Rewritten/Republished | flowing pencil | Poetry | Poetry | 12 | 0.33 | Sep 26, 2010 |
Summary:Please do not feel the need to leave another review. The first piece was actually posted accidentally and while it was well received it was not the piece I had in mind and was only a outline of sorts. I didn't even know I had posted it until the I saw a review! aaaaaagggghhhh.
I am conscious of reviews and rankings so a little uncomfortable doing this. Will work that out later.
I have saved the original.. But this was what I saw. I is metaphorical in nature.
I see many in this peril.. It saddens me. I have no rope to cast...
Any an all feedback always embraced. I hope you find this one as emotionally impacting as I wanted it to be.
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| The Wheelchair | pannastra | Short Story | Flash Fiction | 6 | 0.56 | May 25, 2010 |
Summary:I'd better explain a couple of things which may have you scratching your head.
Muti = Af for medicine, poison, etc etc.
Sun-downer = a drink (or 3) imbibed at about the time the sun’s going down, being 5:30 – 6:30 around these parts.
I look forward to comments.Chapters: |
