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 | Megazaur: The 13th Omada | apatos13 | Novel | Fantasy | 0 | n/a | Oct 7, 2008 |
Summary:This is novel set on the world of Zauridia: a warm tropical planet where man and dinozaur exist together. There are two nations of men called omadas. The 12 Omadas and the 13th Omada. This is world where man is able to control certain dinozaurs with his will. The civilizations are a combination ancient greek and barbarian. Swords and spears are the primary weapons of man.
I'm looking for any feedback, I can get. But I really need them nitpicked line by line. I'm more of a storyteller than a writer. This is the 2nd draft of a novel; I have been working on for 2yrs. Also your reviews will teach me how to do the same on the reviews you need.
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| Quest | Thomas Prosser | Short Story | Memoir | 11 | 3.10 | Sep 30, 2008 |
Summary:This is a cut down version of a hitch hiking adventure I took from Los Angeles to New York that I took many years ago. I Though I have made up some dialog, much of the following events are true. Chapters: |
| Moving Shadows | Kay Lovell | Novel | Historical Fiction | 7 | n/a | Feb 26, 2008 |
Summary:The story is based upon real facts but with the added writers license to indulge. Romance, and intrigue are part of the story. The development of the harbour in a remote Cornish village, the leading figure of this area was a Solicitor and a Banker, the Cornish family of long standing with connections to the throne. He has an affair with a male clerk, although married, not very satisfactory and his wife eventually meets an officer in the Royal Navy, whose frigate regularly berths at Georgetown, they immediately strike up a relationship.
Poverty in a Fishing Village, a hamlet of nine houses and the wonderful backdrop of the cornish scenery provides the setting for this gentle story.
Feedback: constructive critism please, any weaknesses please point out. development suggestions.
Thanks: I would like to thank those of you that have taken the trouble to give an opinion and it has been taken on board. The rest of the book is still under construction, and yes I do use too many words. But the editing is still underway. I have only just realised that I could alter the layout, still learning you see. Ooops!Chapters: |
